Lol I didn't even read it I just wanted to tell you that sheik is a girl and her own person sorry for the false review. XD

Nice history!

I love you fic...

I never really go onto this Site. Well, the "Super Smash Brothers Fanfic" Site. I've read a few Stories on here, just for fun, and alot of them I just couldn't help but laugh at (I'm not naming any, as that would be offence to the Writers).

I actually am quite enjoying this though. You've kept it in the Game and things that relate to it, and haven't taken it into a Realife setting sort-of Fic (if you understand what I mean).

It's hard to work on Characters from this Game, especially since most of them don't really have much of a Story or setting behind them in the actual Game, unlike their own Games they were originally from. So it seems as if you have to create your own for each different Character, you've done this fairly well in what I've seen so far. Though, I kind of find it hard to believe that Samus would act in such a way, as to how professional and humourless she is in the Metroid series. (I saw on your "page" or whatever you call it you enjoy the Metroid Games, so do I. A huge fan of Metroid Prime I am).

If you decide to reply to this, send me a Private/Personal Message on my page (I still don't know the name!) because my MSN e-mails don't work so I can't check replies directly from here. Thankyou.

Very interesting, I prefer SamusXZelda, but I like your story a lot, it's fascinating and cute X3

Update soon

this is really good.

But I think that it is just sad that samus got injured.