This story is soo cute. Ichigo is so cute as an embarassed teenager!

I think you kept the characters well within their personalities. Loved it.

Did you pass exactly millimeter just the way I thought it would be Ichigo's relationship with Rukia, and I loved it!

It was well written so divinely that looks like it came out of a dream!

But this story is a dream, a beautiful dream *-* and very hot right ...

The emotions were very well written!

I loved how you could describe their situation was very realistic and very well written.

Congratulations and is a favorite!

kisses

Loved it.

These two are so in their character.

I enjoyed reading this

Good job

that was a little forceful of him but the lemons isn't bad. it makes up for it :)

This was an incredible story! Ichigo and Rukia were in character, all right! Keep up the good work! I only hope that I can write like you someday! :)

Nicely written. (Not much else I can say about this without making it awkward, so I'll stick with "nicely written". XP)

Ichigo. Rukia. Tension. Cuteness. Imaginary love triangles. Bleach.

…m’lady, my hat is off to you. I don’t think I can say something that wasn’t already mentioned in the previous comments, so I’ll just say this: congratulations.

Awe! I loved it! It was so realistic:D

i really loved reading this. its realistic, keeps ichi and ruki in character, and over all, its just too cute to not like. heehee, hope there's more :)

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this one-shot; probably because it was the most realistic one I've read. Goodness knows I love my IchigoxRukia smut, but it's nice to read a fic where Ichigo is the portrayed like the sexually inexperienced teenage boy that he is. I could totally buy him struggling with his newfound feelings for a girl he considers a friend. The first time awkwardness was spot on and it made sense that Rukia had to help him out in areas. Good job.

Uhlalah! AWESOME! :)

OMG This is soooo in-character that it isn't even funny! It's like Tite Kubo is writing this himself, if I didn't know any better!

Marvelous job I tell you, absolutely magnificent!

Thank you!

xoxo -DramaQueen

... guh.

*reaches out and wiggles fingers* moar plz?

Seriously that was just... awesome. The ichiruki fan in me is tired from the joygasm :D:D:D

I will DEFINITELY watch you from now on. :D Now to read the other fics you've written! *joy*