Reviews for Aberration
JonahWuzHeer chapter 1 . 7/20
Can't believe it's already been 5 years since I read this fic. It just goes without saying that the character you created is just so lovable and that I wanna see more of this. It's really sad that you seem to have run out of inspiration and I know it's not reasonable for me to ask for more since it seems so hard to draw more inspiration after so much time, seeing as how you might have lost the original vision of how you wanted your story to go, but I wanna ask anyways for you to continue this story because I actually enjoyed it so much and literally check at least twice a day for updates with the wild hope that 'today was the day you picked the story up again'. Much thanks for the story so far, and please consider writing more
Immortal Bubblewrap chapter 20 . 7/19
I know it's been like five years but it would be amazing if you updated this story! I really love this fic and it has amazing potential! I would loooove to see Itachi involved somehow one day.
Also I ship Rae and Kakashi so so so very hard, I love the conversations between them and I can see it turning flirty so easily. 3
You probably have no inspiration for this anymore but just know that if you were to continue it on it would probably make a lot of people - myself definitely included - very happy :)
I'm gonna go check out your other stories now :D
Anon chapter 20 . 7/12
Hey, I know you have probably given up on this story, which is a bit disappointing, but that's life. I won't ask you to update or anything! I just want to say that I really, really enjoyed what you've already written here, and that it's a great story, and I love how all the characters are subtly affected by Rae, and how those subtleties become big changes.

Overall, great story, great plot, and great character!
Marisol Castro chapter 20 . 6/21
me encanta y si pudieras terminarla seria aun mejor
aperson1234567890 chapter 11 . 6/10
Will say I usually don't like self inserts as most often fall short on likeable characters, however, you've managed to make it likeable so good job! Also I gotta say I think I also wanna see if I'd be able to get Tora the cat to like me. I've never met a cat that I haven't been able to at least pet and that's including some basically feral cats who run if someone so much as blinks. Anyway I've been enjoying the story!
Nanashi Samurai chapter 5 . 5/27
In regards to Lee, if I remember correctly, his chakra coils never developed fully hence why he can't use chakra.
Guest chapter 20 . 5/10
gosh I LOVE this fic, sadly probably discontinued but... I love Rae!
nomdeplums chapter 20 . 4/28
i love reading this story! such a unique twist
James Atlas chapter 20 . 4/23
It's April 23rd, 2020 and this fic kept me up since I got home to work until three hours before I have to go back in for another shift. I love it. As much as I know you're probably wrapped up in life, I want you to know that this was well written and made me CARE about these characters! Thank you for all the time and effort you put into this fanfiction. You've made a lot of people's day!
guac chapter 20 . 4/18
oh my god, it's been four years, i hope you're doing well and you manage to muster up some inspiration to continue this story. i feel like i've become so desensitized to the lack of updates that i wouldn't care if in the next chapter madara came bursting out of the hokage mountain riding a rainbow unicorn at this point, lol. have a nice day
airunee chapter 20 . 4/15
I know it's been a while since you updated but let me just say, your OC is one of the best I've read so far (in ffnet, ao3 or wattpad). I love how realistic you portrayed her and all the events that keep getting pushed onto her really make the story feel more alive. It really drives it into Rae's head that though she has read enough about a character's life and practically know even what their bloodtype is, she doesn't truly KNOW them. It's very jarring irl and not a lot of writers express that as well as you do. I truly admire your writing and just you way of thinking in general.

On the other hand, PLEASE do not kill Gaara T.T I know it may seem like a perfect world if none of the characters die but Gaara already dies in canon (though is revived) and I just really want my little panda bean to get some sleep and get his black eye rested up okay?

Also, calling on Itachi? Yes.
Toolazytosignin chapter 20 . 4/13
This is one of the better insert stories on the site, and though it's been awhile, I still hope one day you'll be inspired again to update. Even if that day doesn't come, I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading this fic. I find myself re-reading it over and over again, and trying to imagine where exactly the story might've gone. Thanks for the read~
Toolazytosignin~
NothingNooneZero chapter 20 . 4/2
I've just started to fall back into my previous obsession with all things Naruto related and Holy Hokage, this story has spurred it on like no one's business! This is absolutely freaking amazing! I love it, 'ttebayo! It also doesn't hurt that I've always adored Hatake-sama either, I suppose... But back to the point: Rae is a brilliant OC, this is an awesome story and I just wanted you to know that. I'll end up rereading this in a weeks time, maybe less. Thank you for uploading and sharing this absolute gem. If you, let's just say, decided to update? You can be certain that it'll be much appreciated. Thank you, again for this lovely story! ~NothingNooneZero
Daniqueenb chapter 20 . 3/11
Please don't kill Garra. I love his and Naruto's friendship
Shadow.nao chapter 20 . 3/11
Awesome fic! Please update!
Kudos!
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