Loved this story, I can't thank you enough having a person of color as the main character. Being a person of color it's disheartening to not see women of color as the main ladies more often. It's such a amazing thing to read and actually connect with the character. So thank you!

this story is OUSTANDING. kudos!

I'll be honest. I cried at the end. Great fic. Great writing. Definitely getting put in my favorites.

i want to go for saying this isn't for Chapter 1 this is an opinion for like the whole story i read all of it in like one day! I loveddddd it man. if it were a dude i'd have it's babies33 Awesome OFC , nice dialouge, the people were in character everything was awesome! Sex scene would've jut been top notch but it held it's on without it! Unf..

best line ever

the Fuhrer isn't going to kill himself, is he?"

its funny, ironic and funny

"I know, Donny. Come on, if we don't get to the table, your Nana will use that bat on all of us."

LOL oh Nana. :)

Oh lord, you made me cry.

I really enjoyed this story. I hope to hear more from you!

Awww how sad but it's a great ending! You should write another donny/oc story mabye one where he doesn't die?

I'm really enjoying your story. Josie is such a kick-ass character, i really like her. Look forward to an update.

This is just lovely.

I really like this story. I hope you don't decide to have Donny die like he does in the movie hah

Cute. Sorry I didn't review sooner. I never got the alert that this was updated. Great chapter though.

Of course I like it. I like that Donny has pretty much claimed Josie as his and I also like that she initiates things. It's really cute.

Great chapter. Hope to read more soon.

I'm really bad a sex scenes too, so I can't help you there, but I will tell you that I liked this chapter. I too wouldn't be able to stomach that sound. I'm glad Josie's getting the hang of things