It’s great, give me a month or so for my autistic brain to shut up about rereading, and I’d gladly go over the previous chapters for you, correct words, letters, punctuation where needed

well with 2 years and no update I'm pretty sure this ones dead oh well it was a good one

please continue the story if you ever get the chance. :D

Looking forward to the continuation :)

please update soon, it seems as if drakken has realized the truth before anyone else and im guessing shego has gone to warn kim and most likely save her from whoever attacks first but still waiting for shego to admit to kim her feelings hope it happens soon

I look forward to what you do with this.

your way of telling story is fine atleast try not to put too much typos but other than that you are AWESOME AND DON'T STOP UPDATING 'CAUSE YOU ARE AWESOOOOOOOOOME! and take your time.

looking forward to seeing more of your story
keep up the good work

Knowing Drakken isn't a complete dick. He'd probably actually feel bad about blinding Kim. Well once he thought about it logically and not like he thinks a villain would think. Besides with him seeing Shego as family, I think he'd start to understand why Shego was pissed at him about Kim. And I also think he'd want to maybe try and fix it. He's not heartless, just clueless that he's better as a good guy, than a villain.

Besides I think Drakken makes for a cool friend, I mean if he didn't try and be evil his ideas are kind of neat, same with the Tweebs.

The more you write the better you become. I know I've slowly improved over the years once I started writing.

Have you writing any more Of this story because it's quit good

I wish you would finish the story

Very nice. I have a feeling that Shego's gonna have to start protecting Kimmie soon. Keep up the work. :)

Looking forward to reading what happens next in chapter 7.

Please update when you can.