I like the extra scenes that are in chapter 8, but not chapter 7. They tye up a lot of loose ends.

So they had their children a year or two earlier?
This is one of the most romantic Ranma fics I have ever seen.
I adore this story!

LOVE

Ugh, it's saccharine and all that but DaisukiFox, your old writing was baaad and full of corn...

I love it! Makes me wish I had gotten into Ranma fanfiction sooner.

this reminds me of a older story with a similar idea that paired ranma and akane and while i like that story i think this one has a better story the reason i think that is because it dont feel like just by reading the first chapter i can pretty much lay out whats going to happen

D'AWWW I am conflicted with all these feels!

Definitely an interesting story good job!

great story. does this relate to previous works? if so then it is brilliant.

i prefer ch 7 more. idk why. maybe it's due to foxxy's writing or the fact the engagement scene felt way out of place. i know they mention the engagement with hitomi once, but never really went on it. felt like filler. but loved the story. especially dealing with ranma n ryoga relationship

Perfect:)

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Very good yet u didn't mention Ukyo but one time this is my favorite story.

After having spent the entire day reading this I have to ask: was this a continuation of the original story or a one-shot?

Because in the original story it was a cursed item that brought them together, namely the cursed bracelet, but in this time it was the cursed mirror that brought them together. Though it is a major difference I suppose the end result is still the same.

A great story.

As I said in my previous review I do not go with most fan fictions because people tend to get them wrong. But once again your duo has properly worked with the characters so that they act and react as I think the actual characters would given the situation and time span the story uses. The children are all interesting, what we learn of them, and I believe Hitomi is a one of a kind character.

The death aspect of the story being the catalyst for the entire story, resulting in the possibility that Ranma and Ryouga would never get together was a good idea. Once again you made me wonder if Hitomi would change the time line into something completely different, one where she WAS Ranma and Akane's daughter, or completely ruin it all the same- or worse, change very little at all, leaving Ryouga still deceased in the future.

Though the spelling and grammatical errors where a lot more evident in this story, so much so it took a bit a way from it, the humor was superb and the characters well enough that I do not fault either of you for it.

9/10

cool. some dark moments, but not too much. all in all a pretty light fic that just makes your day when you read it. everyone is happy and i have to admit im a sucker for those kind of stories.

8.5/10. some parts/events could have used a little more developement but if only for the fact that you actually finished the story makes it one of the best on . the fact that it is a very good story is jsut a very good icing on the top _.

good job guys!