| Reviews for On the Trail of Phineas Torn |
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   Lunary chapter 1 . 6/11/2017 Who would have guessed that they would be mad at Tim when they're not mentioned in his newest book. Good story. Regards, Lunary |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2016 I love these little stories! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/5/2015 Oh, this was fun! And a great idea... |
| Arhie chapter 1 . 3/31/2014 Very cute. I love Fornell's reaction. |
| 1sunfun chapter 1 . 8/29/2013 Nice Story. 1sunfun |
| camry72 chapter 1 . 4/10/2012 I'm sorry but they are pretty crappy co workers. But your story was totally awesome. Accuse him of leaving, mad if he writes about them mad if he doesn't. McGee is to nice. Such a great character. I bet they were expecting for Fornell to blow up in Tim face. Hmm. He was only doing what they told him to do. |
| 9foxgrl chapter 1 . 10/10/2011 I should have known Fornell would have been flattered. Hmm...I wonder what would happen if McGee wrote one about Vance? |
| Fed up with this crap chapter 1 . 12/19/2010 Phineas Torn lol, should do Emily's reaction to that. Good chapter btw. |
| Lady aracne chapter 1 . 9/4/2010 ohhhhh Pam , this was wonderful, I loved it so much! hehehe they all wanted to be in a Gemcity book again, I can see that totally happening, great! |
| spnMom chapter 1 . 9/4/2010 I loved this story. Boy, do I miss Tim's writing. Those co-workers should have been flattered. I believe your scenario much more. Thanks for posting. |
| NCISisbest chapter 1 . 9/1/2010 Hahaha. I love this. 3 I knew the team liked being in a big-hit story. I love how Fornell likes the fact Tim wrote about him. hehe. This is great. |
| smilingT12 chapter 1 . 8/28/2010 Oh very nice. |
| TesubCalle chapter 1 . 8/28/2010 I really enjoyed this one, Channel D! I think you really managed to capture Tim's struggle between his usual meek temperament and his emerging sense of empowerment and entitlement his professional success has brought him. I totally loved Tony and Ziva's reactions throughout. Of course Gibbs would be the one to instantly recognize the real person behind Phineas! Thanks for sharing this one with us! |
| RedDragen chapter 1 . 8/28/2010 I liked this short story. I can't wait for more |
| Gunner'sDream chapter 1 . 8/27/2010 Haha loved this. I don't know why the team rags on him all the time about the books. Firstly I'd be flattered if someone wrote a book with a character resembling me and secondly that's all they really did was resemble their physical characteristics so I don't see what they have to be angry about.. Haha like in this story I think they secretly enjoy it! _ oh yea! and two points to me for figuring out early that phineas torn was fornell :) |
