okay. i love the humor. nuff said. great story by the way :P

It's not 'Schlachtung ihn' it's ' Ihn Schlachten'. trust me I'm from Germany. Ps: Great story keep going!

Seriously? You let the story end there? Christ, all this awesome build up and honestley a great story and you let it die there? I want to say i regret reading because this story seems dead. But at the same time id rather not in some dim hope it continues.

Well for what you wrote it was incredibly good, if a bit frustrating knowing that our favorite characters were in constant mortal danger, still incresibly good. I was really hoping to read where the duel protein make up shep and tali had was going.

I do hope u continue this story...would love to read what happens next

good story but getting strange

Aw snap. Shit just hit the fan. Moar!

That ending feels like it should have had the dramatic zoom in on Shepard's face accompanied with 'Dum, dum, dum!'. :D

I am trying to think if any other story I've read has 'actively' killed off Kasumi (other than 'died on the collector ship, etc). I'm just not finding one. That's a landmark in my reading I suppose ;)

Your making me care about Nikhir, that's just mean. I can't root for her with out feeling bad about Tali or Shepard, and vies versa. Can't wait to see how it all ends.

I wonder if Shepard can sway another cold blooded killer to his cause. I for one Can't wait to find out.

This is just simply great. I love the complexity and the flow of the story, it's just... Well great! I really hope you keep up with this story.

I'd be a little more worried about a potential crew member that happens to have skills that are useful, and knowing I need a replacement that just falls in to my lap. But I don't posses Shep's gut, I wonder how this will all turn out.

I wonder who the "Shadow Woman" is? Can't wait to find out. Mean trick you played on Shep.

Damn, Kasumi is dead. That was unexpected, Raven just made an enemy that no 0ne wants on there ass. Can't wait for the next update.

Kasumi noooooo! Another good chapter, cant wait to see how it turns out