Ohhh, another chapter! I'm sorry to tell you, but there were some mistakes.

One. I don't think Poseidon would have any other kids, but that's just my opinion.

Two. I don't think they would really say, what the Hades. Just say what the heck. Also, EVERYONE should know who Percy is. He defeated Kronos. Sorta. And speaking of that, Percy wouldn't really say 'I am Percy Jackson'. It's OOC. He'd say 'I'm Percy Jackson. Replace I am for I'm in Percy's speech.

Three. Percy would tell Aaron that the 'unclaimed' cabin is Hermes' cabin.

~Cra-zGirl100

I like this chapter, too. It is a little fast, though. Where did the sphinx come from?

Also, Chiron is a tiny bit OOC. But that's okay.

And, you spelled honor wrong. H-O-N-O-R, not H-O-N-O-U-R. Happy writing!

~Cra-zGirl100

This chapter is mysterious in some ways, but leaves you staving for moe! ***** -5 stars

~Cra-zGirl100

is it me or is aaron's not surprised or confused when chiron said he's the son of a god...

I love it! Jayden and Finn are hilarious. Well-written overall. My only complaint is that at points, it seemed a bit rushed-finding out about the gods, discovering his parentage, becoming friends with Jayden and Finn, etc.

Thanks! Please keep writing!

Nice. I like this. Unfortunately, your link doesn't seem to work. I can't see what Aaron looks like. :(

This was actually quite a good read. Good grammar, and so far, good plot. I'm not into your whole NCIS shit. I found it not to my taste. I think you might have deleted the story I alerted you for. Anyway, I am looking forward to the whole 'Claiming' ceremony. I'm also wondering what God is his father.

Good luck,

Vash