| Reviews for Closer |
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   RamonaFlowers25 chapter 12 . 7/23 I give this story an 8 out of 10! it was very cute andthe characters were on point and it was so sweet to watch them together . HOWEVER, I think we were robbed a proper lemon, and the ending felt rushed. The ending was very good, I just wanted more elaboration, and flat out just more story in general. The thing with the assassin also went nowhere...i know that the other version of this was longer, and it's also VERY VERY good (the best sasuhina fic in my opionion) I just wanted more! I also wish Sasuke had told her about how they met as kids, like in Traitor Branded...i also would have loved to see their relationship grow more instead of all the time skips. I got the feeling that maybe you were just wanting to finish...but your prowess as a righter kept me HOOKED. I stayed up all night reading this (even though I have a 2 year old that will be up and demanding her breakfast soon) |
| RamonaFlowers25 chapter 8 . 7/23 "YOU CANNOT ESCAPE LOVES EMBRACE" I fucking love lee. He is so precious |
| orange.leaf.hokage chapter 12 . 10/5/2019 Aww this story was just so sweet and honest . Thank you for it! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 9/18/2019 aaaaa this story was so great! |
| kyzylmakhoto chapter 12 . 5/17/2019 This story is amazing! I love it! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/29/2019 I loved this! |
| Guest chapter 12 . 9/30/2018 Thanks for the nice story - |
| DirtyAim chapter 1 . 6/24/2018 That was the most in character exchange between Sasuke and Hinata that I have read in a long time. Thank You! _ |
| Himesama17 chapter 1 . 4/29/2018 I love it! Great job wish you can more sasuhina |
| Shiranai Atsune chapter 1 . 4/2/2018 The link on your profile doesn't work, but I assume it's archiveofourown? Where are you active now? |
| Hime-Kim lee chapter 12 . 9/15/2017 great story |
| kittycat130 chapter 12 . 7/13/2017 love your story...! also did not see the coming when sas/hin did some...umm nardy thing it was eye opening o.0 |
| AndromedaAstrophile chapter 1 . 6/13/2017 this was soooo good! i just wish the ending xD was more... spicy |
| Hinarahyuchiha chapter 12 . 6/6/2017 LOVED IT! I'VE READ BOTH YOUR BOOKS AND I JUST WANNA CRY. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 3/13/2017 This keeps getting better. I don't really remember the middle and ending of traitor branded just that I enjoyed reading it. All sasuhina fics are mixed in my mind. I really like how this is going |
