Reviews for Dirty |
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![]() ![]() I was already laughing when she pushed him into the mud, but that "nose bleed" part just made me lose it XD |
![]() ![]() Beast Boy brings in bucket of mud in Ravens room Rae: umm Beast Boy what is that? Beast Boy splashes mud on her and on him, then he takes his shirt off. BB: Lets be dirty together. Cy comes by later, hears moans of pleasure ( ungh,ungh,ohyeah,dontstop,ungh) (O.O) |
![]() ![]() Damn thats dirty! -SS |
![]() ![]() Damn that was dirty! ;D -SS |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sadly enough... I'm proud of myself for getting what they mean by 'dirty girl/boy'. That's not good... HOW DO U HAVE SUCH WRITING SKILLZ?! |
![]() ![]() PERFECT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't get the nose-bleed thing please explain! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my freaking gosh. That was awesome. Characters were great. Situations were great. Wink, wink. I got the suggested. So greatgreatgreat …hmm… Awesome! I wish there was a less used word to use. And I like the revengful Raven. Good stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mud puddles for the win! Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lmfao nice! And it took me a while to get the noise bleed thing, but when I did I couldn't stop laughing XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() As they say, one good turn deserves another! Great one shot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, so funny :) and I got the nose bleed thing :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, they needed to get down and dirty. )Literally. Goodplot, cool writing style. Good job! ~Hexpert |
![]() ![]() BB is seductive he likes dirty girls |
![]() ![]() Gosh this made me crack up! Love it |