Damn...Jus-Just damn.

Ok, this is the best Xander story ever. Have recommended it to most people I know. Was a little shy about reading anything with the Sailor Morons in it but I'm glad I got over my phobia.

I can honestly see the Sailor Scouts' naivety playing against them in this sort of thing. In the initial seasons at least, they seem to have a troubling lack of foresight (can't blame them, they're kids) that could easily backfire when they act without thinking something through completely or act assuming they know everything about the situation.

oh... so you were serious about that warning about it being dark, I see. somehow, I didn't picture... that dark. lol. but it was really good. Xander is a badass

HORY SHEET!
JESUS FUCKING CHRIST ON A JALAPENO-STICK!
WTF DID I READ THERE AND WHY DID I LIKE IT LIKE MY CAPS!?

That was DARK! Me like a lot!

Personally, I like those stories where the Sailors are dark... because the light is so bright it blinds them if that makes sense? They act out of naive purpose, assured in their righteousness and have access to cosmic power... not exactly a combination that seems to be a good thing. Usagi can be considered a reality warper, reinforcing her worldview early in the series... and then, it may be fannon, but imposing what she sees as peace, not really considering the actual consequences?

Yeah, can totally see that. Can also see on Setsuna's end a geas/compulsion to serve the royal line, combined with restrictions in what futures she is allowed to look for, and a geas to recreate the Silver Millennium, not being allowed to rebel or think over the moral concerns...

And actually, fits for why the future did not know what caused it. They were unaware that they were the ones the kill the world.

Which, makes Xander taking them down... well, actions have consequences and it is only at the last that the Silver Millennium reborn will reap them.

yup the Sailor Scouts are the "Bad" ones. I always felt they reckless and irresponsible trying to get things their way and not thinking about the rest of the world.

this story should have more favorites

true be told it is rather good narrative and the plot is not completelly unexpected (a possible logical leap rather than full OC'sness that would make others burn your story)

(i am not a critique only saying how good this thing was)

if anything the only problem (and not really worth more than a food note writen in soup) is the lack of actual magical attacks (i actually forgot jupiter because she never said her spell (also forgot about MErcury... forget it, your story was Gold))

i have only read this one and your are now among my favorite authors (unless you write slash, then you fall down sice i will menatally repress your existance and ignore most stories from your post)

i particulary liked how you took advantage of Xander's status as [normal] rather than give him any super power, or even how you turned the Sailor Scouts as the bad guys

seriously, i felt like stories are somewhat lacking on the evilness of the Silver Millenium, after all humanity fough more than 200 hundred years (Acumulated among a lot of revolutions of leaders and system of leadership) to drop it simply because someone was the 'good' guy, or 'rigthfull ruler'.

(not to say it is not possible, as a zelda fanfic has said, humanity is stupid enough that if the popular option was 'vote for Kingdom X' they may renounce their democracy because being a kingdom was cool, or it was funny choise at the time)

on a side note, this is kind of similar to what you could imagine happened to Queen Serenity (Sailor Moon's 'true' Mom) when her kingdom fell (AKA there is no live on the moon, nor any other planet, for she took the power source and used it on her spell)

now, on a personal note i am NOT against characters who try to conquer the world, but i am a lot more acepting when the guy is declaring it on the rufftop, or at least being honest with the fact that while he may be a [hero], but he is NOT everyone's hero, nor really heroic (without the Angs).

nor do i dislike Minako Aino who is actually a great character (whose personality i belive is actually pretty close to Star from [StarvsEvil] or at least it was as Sailor V), she has comedic flaws and a boyfriend obsecion but is actually a tomboy hidden under blonde hair (she made jumping school fence popular before Nisekoi (And others))

Finally i simply want to congratulate you on how great this story was, you are better than 50% of Naruto fanfic (you are not higer since they have more (but not better) explosions, and some harems (some suck despite of them so you are still better))

P.D. true be told you did better than 99% of Naruto fanfic (the amount of them is simply too high to quantify acuratelly), extra points for your lack of OP characters.

P.D.2 congratulation on the hidden achivement, redemption of Setsuna (ignorant time traveler under mind control) and lack of Mamoru (his true history is that he is a pedopile vagrant (that may or not be from the future) that got a Tuxtedo and like Aladin he lied to usagi about his 'royal status')(or Serenity (queen or princess, does it matter?) belived he was pretty enough to be her boy toy(AKA 'King') and to hide this she said he was a prince)

P.D.3. i may or may not have liked Sailor Moon, true be told it was so long ago that i do not rememer it acuratelly (and am too lazy to watch the full Cristal), but i did like Sailor V (manga) were Minako would abuse her superpowers and popularity to her own ends [Spoiler WArning] (self made homework by magical pen, kissing boys while looking like someone else (or they were unconcious), free vacations by taking someone else ticket, etc) [End of Spoiler]. they were comedy. yet for a fanfict (and because of similarities to Dumbledore bashing) i belive that Sailor Scouts and DArk kingdom are merelly 2 bad guys figthing about who would conquer Earth.

P.D.4 i need friends to dowload those opinions so my review's are not as large, or learn to resume my thoughs in something that would not be longer than your actual story.

P.D.5. i belive you are better than some actual animes (such as DXD and Mahou Retoise) sadly you can not be paid by fanfic (...or could you?)

Amazing

excellent!

...Sweet story

Aside from madoka magica, magical girl anime and manga have always rubbed me the wrong way. consequences exist for a reason, good to see a fic that shows that.

Wow...

Damn. That, is just hard core... I always hated the Sailor Bitches. Too stupid for words, with too much power.