please write more

i hope there's more to the story.

you should pick this back up. in fact im going to make this your new years resolution for 2014. ;)
can't wait to read the next chapter. and actually i have never red mayonaka wa junketsu. so this is all new stuff for me. so hope this review gives you some motivation cause you haven't updated in 4 years :)

WHY YOU NO POST MORE

Aaaaah please continue this, it's soo good!

This story made the doujinshi sooo much clearer for me, it's very well written good job! please continue it!

I am thoroughly enjoying this fic, especially the fact that it is first person. thx for posting/writing!

So I actually read this dojin on accident. Like, I saw some pages but they were in Japanese, so I had no idea what was actually going on. Then I ran across a translation and started reading and when it became clear what was actually going on it was like OH GODS NO but by then it was too late because I'd already seen the later pages and knew what was going to happen and now understood what it meant, including the fact that apparently at the end, Mokuba had been kidnapped and forced into child prostitution. I totally freaked out and cried for hours. So anyways I obviously didn't read this fic, but assuming it follows that manga, you severely need a warning for Bakura raping Marik and forcing him into prostitution and also a warning for pedophilia and forced childhood prostitution.

This is an awesome story~ cant wait for the next chapter owo

I enjoyed that alright...-drooling-

I hope you continue! -whines- Im not taking no for an answer!...Neither "I dont think so" or -says about 200005552000-...LOL i CHEATED! Now that was hawt~ xDD This is like rape...sassy~ ;P

OMG! SO THAT'S WHERE YOU'VE BEEN! I was wondering where you vanished off to. Ah well you gave me enough time to write two oneshots of my own and post them up XD. It's not a bad thing. I can tell you tried really hard for this chappy! And you did very well. I love how detailed the scene is and how you're portraying what Malik feels and how irritated and scared he is. In the doujin we see a bit of it, but not in that much detail. But Oh my gah you left it at a cliffy yet again, it's like you're in love with em! D: Ah well I look forward to seeing the next chapter!

Keep up the great work!

~BleedingStrawberries

imma reviewing! you seemes sad cause you only had 11 reviews. that isn't that bad. i've seen people with only 5 chapters and like 1 review. i probably won't review again just cause im lazy like that but i'm still reading! have no doubts!

I likeeeeeeee it!

Mooooooooaar pweeeese? X3

This story is just scream for a reviewww! xD

Omg! YOU UPDATED! XD It's a great surprise!

Anyways... YAY FOR HOT SCENE! Can't wait for next chapter! I'm so glad it's finally getting to that part! I have the "Queen of Kabukichou" doujin too! I got really upset when I discovered there wasn't much Bakura X Malik. P.

What can I say? First person written very well. The portrayal of Malik's feelings are done really well! Gosh this fic is so good it's hard for me to pin point all the good points! The reviews all sound the same XDDDD Someone will suspect I copy and paste the reviews! XDDDD.

What can I say? Keep the great work!

~BleedingStrawberries

(sorry that my reviews are always so crap XD)

Ukh you're mean to just leave it like that. I've read the doujin twice but still cannot resist to see it in this story since you make everything goes rather slowly which is good! Update soon plz!