thank you so much, very well writen!

Hi!

Oh how I love this! I can definitely see Sara interacting with everyone like this. Great emotion, narrative and the steamy scene at the end.

Thank you for sharing!

This is so was totally worth reading it!

Very well done. You got Mozzey on point and I like the references. It's an intelligent piece of fan fiction and funny too.

this is amazing! I luv luv sara & neal! great story!

This was really lovely writing and a great story. And thank you for the author's notes also, it completed the story. I love "like they've called women and children to the lifeboats", it creates a sensation of them in that moment. Really nicely done and true to the characters and the characters as you wrote them.

I love the progression of Neal and Sara's relationship in this story. Sizzling ending too :D

Lovely! I really enjoyed this! I loved the jaracter interaction!

Lovely. So well-written, loved how perfect Sara's characterization was. Favorite line though has to be the part about the male model with dextrous fingers. Great job.

This is going to be one of those reviews where you're like holy cow I posted this fic almost 2 years ago, but the fact is there is an appalling lack of fic for Neal and Sara and time and time again I come back to this one. The dialogue is absolutely spot-on for all of them and it's interesting and sexy. Just wanted to leave a review on how much I love this story.

and do have sizzling some more.

I've read this three times in the past twenty four hours, it's just that good. You kept them in character so well. And a lot of sexual scenes people write are painfully awkward to read, but this one just gave me butterflies. It was fantastic.

I really loved this fic. I'd love to see more in this little universe. There really isn't enough Neal/Sara fic out there!

I'm kind of a grammar and spelling freak, so I want to thank you for your dedication and hard work. I am of the belief that in a good story, the words should fade away. The reader should simply be encompassed by the imagery created by the words. I can honestly say that I found myself completely absorbed. Quality work!

Shannon E

loved the story line but I think you might want to check your french. By no means do I speak fluent french but I google translated what you wrote and came up with "yet you still feel my pain". I also searched what you wanted to say and got "Pensez-vous que l'amour pouvait racine dans mon âme à nouveau?" just thought you might like to know. LOVED the story though :)

I'm late to the party, obviously, but I just finally saw the season two episodes (on DVD) and decided to go in search of some Neal/Sara goodness.

I'm very glad I found yours! :) The mood of the story, and the characters' voices were spot-on. Good job :)