This was wonderous

That was very well written please write more soon

I like how they didn't make any declarations or anything. It just seemed very like them. :P

hehe yay! i love this story!o

Ok... I waited to read it all before commenting... That was so. Very. Fucking. HOT! You need to write lots more porn!

So cute! and great job with the smut whoo hoo

This was good, albeit a tad contradictory. Sherlock says he's not rushing John, but then says "This is your only chance", "One time offer", etc. Doesn't really track.

Great piece of beautifully hot writting. Thanks for sharing.

That whole story blew me away- it was exquisite, sublime, wonderful and every other word for amazing there is! I love the way you made Sherlock just that little bit tender at times, it's just like how I imagined it. And bringing out the soldier in John was great- like they were finally showing all the little hidden pockets of themselves to the person they loved the most. Thank you! Please keep writing, you are quite the wordsmith!

Now that was really hot there! Woo go Johnlock!

What the...oh my goodn-...I...what? Absolutely amazing! ;)

Excellent. Well written and believable characterisation.

Great story and so very sensual. I could read some more Sherlock/Watson (hint, hint)

Thanks for sharing.

Seriously that was glorious!

Phew! Just read this all the way through... excuse me while i go and have a cold shower... any time you want to write more of the same go for it!