| Reviews for Hidden Desire |
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   Lavender-Lillly chapter 4 . 7/5 Amazing! I'm loving it! |
| HarryJamesPotterismyhero chapter 1 . 4/25 I was really excited to read this based on the reviews, but your grammar is horrible! Sentences run on, so many missing commas, I cannot handle reading this. Seriously needs to be beta’d. |
| monay9e chapter 34 . 8/23/2019 Loved it! Best paring of Bella and Carlisle. |
| monay9e chapter 1 . 8/23/2019 Ooooooo! Oh my! |
| 8IOwnTheNight8 chapter 10 . 8/18/2019 HOLY SHIT! I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING! |
| Guest chapter 10 . 4/2/2019 Hey there Tisa, That is a great twist and I can see Charlie and Esme together. He's needed a good woman for a while now, plus it leaves things easier for Carlisle and Bella. Shellbean:) |
| hpgleek4evr chapter 34 . 3/1/2019 OMG! On eof the best Carlisle/Bella stories I have ever read! You've got me searching for some Charlie/Esme stories now too! Keep up the good work! |
| nhrc chapter 14 . 7/6/2018 I'm shocked how Charley did not faint! |
| nhrc chapter 2 . 7/5/2018 I read the story a second time and you worry? |
| LiliaJadeWhitlock chapter 34 . 6/16/2018 I love the story, I love Bella with anyone but Edward because I don't think he is right for her, I love your version of Bella/Carlisleand I love how you handled Victoria and how there was no conflict between The Cullens and the Volturi. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story |
| Aggie94 chapter 34 . 6/8/2018 And here is my actual review when I realized I failed to choose The last chapter to make my review. Wow I've read millions of FanFiction. words and this was one of the most original tails to be told. Absolutely enjoyed it could care less about your grammar evidently diamond heart 21 cares. I read fanfiction for the pure enjoyment of the story ends reading others words. Thank you so much for taking the time to finish the story and giving us a truly original take on our favorite characters from twilight. This was dictated with Siri so if there's a weird word sorry life goes on. Thank you for sharing your words. Meg in Texas. |
| Aggie94 chapter 1 . 6/8/2018 I love the star can't wait to see how the rest of this winds up. |
| DiamondHeart21 chapter 1 . 5/16/2018 Yourthis is what happens when you critique someone else’s grammar lol) |
| DiamondHeart21 chapter 1 . 5/16/2018 This is a really nice plot line. I only have one issue. Your grammar. The sentences run together and sometimes aren’t even finished. I found myself having to insert words in my head so I could read it. It’s very distracting and takes away from you’re creative ideas. Otherwise though, I enjoyed it! |
| Rose chapter 34 . 5/7/2018 Thank you for sharing! |
