Reviews for What Might Have Been
SupaChenz AA chapter 7 . 7/17
I think the word 'declared' is being used too much.
wujuninja chapter 23 . 3/25
so many people dead ... what a turn of bad events. story had real potential then it got fucked up
wujuninja chapter 4 . 3/25
tone of this story so strange
csheila chapter 12 . 2/17
Coolness
csheila chapter 8 . 2/17
Story really moves. Congratulations
csheila chapter 7 . 2/17
Fun to watch them team up differently depending on situation.
csheila chapter 6 . 2/17
Dress or dog? Always take the dog
csheila chapter 5 . 2/17
Coldness works to their advantage. It’s all about finding your group
csheila chapter 2 . 2/17
Major coolness
csheila chapter 1 . 2/17
Very interesting. So much ambition. Hope they keep their humanity (I.e. they don’t imagine they must step on others).
Sheelahdog chapter 1 . 1/2
Please ! I know what happens. Please?!
LirielleA chapter 23 . 1/2
What an amazing story. I devoured it in hours.
I really enjoyed reading it, the pace and the action is amazing. The most fun part was the Tri-Wizard tournament, the planning, the detail of the characters and your execution in writing it.
You came up with a lot of really interesting ideas. At the beginning, I was a little hesitant to see the lack of involvement with Hermione, as I find her such an interesting character and with so much potential, particularly in your plot and I am happy to see her more involved as the story goes on.
Personally, the only thing that I find sad is the lack of detail or longer exploration of development, what is going on behind the scenes or character relationships and their inner/emotional conflict points, for example in form of a love triangle between Draco/Hermione/Victor, since I though there was so much potential.

However, I really enjoyed it and hope to see the continuation soon.
Trigerrr chapter 7 . 12/8/2019
I hardly add a story to my favourites before completing it. Great work!
reseh chapter 23 . 11/25/2019
I’ve really enjoyed this story so far. I like the smart kids taking care of business. I also like that they have adults engaged and helping. Thanks so much for posting!
Araytigre chapter 23 . 11/24/2019
Not Cool, Not Cool, Not Cool! This has been a Great Story up until you drop this Major Cliffy, and then Not update it! It has been an enjoyable read, with wonderful twists and turns, and great ideas. One question begs to be asked, with all of the Old Wards, and the newer ones bolstered, how did a Basilisk, a blinded one at that, get on the Grounds of the School, in the dead of Winter? Snakes, of any sort Do, Not, Like, The, Cold, period, and remember, this is still late January, early February at best. Other than that, I have really liked what you have come up with (until this Cliffy that is, lol), so I do hope that your Muse and RL will allow you to complete it (Soon?). Thank You. TTFN
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