love it plz write more

Iam in love with this story..

more update plz~

hope the chapter not to short

I'm not the bigest twilight fan but this story is really good. I wish it was like this intead of being dark and serious. Keep up the good work

Great chapter

update please~

Hi. Tis me again. I'm not a fan of twilight but you write so well that I can't stop reading. Anyway.. Just want to say that U ARE A GREAT WRITER. I KNOW U ARE COS THEN I WOULDN'T BE READING 3 OF YOUR FANFICS AT THE SAME TIME!

Hi. Tis me again. I'm not a fan of twilight but you write so well that I can't stop reading. Anyway.. Just want to say that U ARE A GREAT WRITER. I KNOW U ARE COS THEN I WOULDN'T BE READING 3 OF YOUR FANFICS AT THE SAME TIME!

I loved it. i couldn't stop laughing when i read that a 30 year old had a crush on the pack

hmm interesting :)

love this story GO JACOB!

PLEASE KEEP WRITING

yeah, it was good, you might want to work on chapter length just a bit though. and also, not too many half naked scenes, im a straight guy who does not want to read too much of that. im sorry about school, i know the feeling, its pretty harsh on me too. dont worry, only like 41 weeks left right? lol

wont update for a while, how could u? lol, just kidding, good luck with the cabin, sorry though, no new ideas this time, but hey maybe next time right

had to include the truck huh? anyways, good going, though i do wonder if its the vamps that change when the werewolves are near in this story since im pretty sure that eds werent a vamp there.

so far... this might be my favorite jacob and bella story ! :) awesome writing!