Considering I just found your story, I'm sad to see you have not continued it. I enjoyed what you did post however.

I general I don't mind odd pairings. Though in my Ghost Hunt fic I'm putting Naru and Mai together. Lin is getting an OC to fall for.

I've only ever seen the Anime and I can not for the life of me picture Lin with Madoka!

I think I'll enjoy your fic! I have thus far!

Eu gosto, é muito legal e também engraçado, só nos primeiros capítulos já me interessei

Perfection and hilarious! You should make a sequel!

your spelling followed wrong, its an o, not an a.

I love that line, "Well would you look at that, mate. It looks like they're at it again." XD

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No not at all I think it was cute

You put a "{1}" but you didn't explain the meaning. (.")
Thought you should know.

Alice

This is totally unbelievable. I'd rather not read a fic where the protagonist is a slut. Also it's highly unprofessional to dress that way in a work place regardless of the lack of dress code. Not only that but it wasn't just to get Lin worked up, who is bassicully her partner,but Naru as well. Her emotions are all over the place. In just the first chapter she went from Naru to Lin in an instant, then cried when Lin couldn't even have a second to figure out his feelings after she confessed out of the blue. Its a great thought for a story but please take note of reality and character development.

HAHAHAH SO FUNNY U SHOULD DO ANOTHER ONE

lol I love how stubbern and persistant Mai is. :p

wonder who the ghost is that was crying? an wonder if its a good ghost or bad one.. could be Lin's grandmother again just my opinion though keep up the good work an hope to see another chap soon :)

well i think since it's rated m you should go all out lol but that's just my opinion. keep up the good work an hope to see another chapter soon :)

Hmmm you should do it all i guess when/if you decided to write or maybe you can write down both lime and lemon at one chapter! )