Of course you need to write the 2nd part! I gotta know how they get out of it... ya know, for the next time I decide to take the scenic route with my special "adventurous" friend. ;-)

Please write more to this...too good.

oh, you gotta continue that...please!

I love this! Really fun, cute, and saucy. Thanks for sharing!

LOL. Oh yeah, you GOTTA write more. That was freakin' awesome. Fast car, beautiful scenery, Eliot droppin' the FBomb all over the place, frisky Parker and HighwayPatrol? Yeah. You're SOOO writing more.

pj

I love how you've portrayed Eliot's thoughts and sensations, halted in his tracks every time because he can't quite keep up, and I love that to him that's part of her appeal.

Story saved to favourites because I hope you'll continue :-)

ahhh, I do love a good parker/eliot fanfic!

that was great loved it

oooooooooo im hooked!

What a great story to start my day! I am a total Eliot/Parker fan so this hit the spot perfectly! More, definitely more, please!