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This is achingly beautiful! I love love love it! Especially how Sherlock processes all of John. Please feel free to give us more feels!

Don't know what you're talking about! The ending was perfect!

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Very satisfying story! I liked it a lot, made my train trip shorter. Thank you for the effort you put in here! Have a fabulous day! :)

This is beautiful ! GAH I wish this actually happened in the show! :P

This is wonderfully written and the last paragraph doesn't need to be an ending. You could easily build on this to create a more elaborate love story..
I at least didn't feel like that was an ending.. this could be the beginning of a shared realization that they both shared these feelings (a surprised realization for John Watson) ... hmmmm? I do love your style of writing.. I would defiantly read the continued story

Lovely :)

AAAAAAHHH I love this so much wow ok

Intimate but pure, sweet, tender, heartwarming. Simply beautiful. A wonderful idea, brilliantly written. I can't possibly understand why you hate the ending; this story is wonderful in its entirety.

That was really good!

I've read this story quite a few times now, and its one of my favourite Sherlock fics. It's so intimate in a very innocent way. Brilliant piece of writing :)

ohhh This was so so so sweet! Really nice story!

The last two days I've spent looking for a well written Johnlock-Fanfiction, and I was nearly giving up, when I finally found your piece, and let me tell you: This was bloody amazing! Thanks a million for sharing.

Very nice, tender and fuzzy... The only thing I didn't like was your unnecessary repeating of "ex-army medic" - why not just stick to John? But seeing that this was published four years ago, I guess it's merely a note, not an advice.