The very last author note… just to say, whoever would be into that must have a very strange fetish for orange hair, neon, and crack.

My laughter has reduced itself to random squeaky sounds. That rarely happens. Props to you good writer

I think the part about the consequences of flaming has scarred me for life. But the story was good.

absolutely love this story. I finished it about 10 minutes ago and I'm still laughing.

"Number 14 seemed tempting but it involved a dolphin, a silk pillow and two bottles of Makai maple syrup. Where the hell was he going to get hold of two bottles of Makai maple syrup on Saturday evening?"

I thought that was the best sentence I'd ever read. Then I read the next one.

Botan was establishing a new relationship with her shoelaces, she'd named them Megumi and Midori and they liked Karaoke.

I just about fell out of my chair laughing. Well done. I really liked this!

I couldn't stop laughing. Thanks! I can just see Shiori saying all of that and ... then Kurama's look... and lol.

Well, it's different from your others but it made me laugh D

I love it!This story is hilarious! I love how Kurama's mum keep questioning and giving advices to her son after knowing he slept with a man. Plus right from the start she had perceive him as uke!

Man, is there anything for Kurama than it? That was mean! And a lot of funny! I started to laugh before the game and have yet to stop! xDD It's just too comical! I loved!

.Atsuko Uehara

THIS IS HILARIOUS. The only thing that didn't really make sense was that Shiori would decide to join in the first place. Other than that, I was laughing my ass off :)

LOL. I love it. That is a horrifing thing if Kuwabara did that.