Reviews for Eclipse: The Beginning
HarmonyB chapter 1 . 1/30/2016
"My name is Lucius Malfoy. I need you - I mean, I apologize. My master needs you."

HAHAHAHA! This fic is a jewel. I love it. I literally CAN'T stop laughing.
Redshadow43 chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
Hey cool, I didn't notice this before, I'll have to read it soon. Interesting pairings-my two favorite fellas...
Simlead-from thesims3.com chapter 11 . 4/8/2011
This was really great! I loved the way that Draco's name was used and I thought it seemed so real, I cannot wait until the next part of this is finished, and I will definitely be checking back! I don't really see anything that needs improving, just keep going with it! The characteristics that the characters had really suited them and it was captivating. I imagined lots of the pairings both of you write, and I am glad someone decided to write about these particular two. Keep up the good work!
mehr03 chapter 11 . 1/23/2011
awesome...loved it...hoping for some bella/voldemort moments
mehr03 chapter 8 . 11/19/2010
nice...please update soon thks and gudluck
mehr03 chapter 6 . 9/23/2010
awesome fic...loved it...please update soon...hope for more bella/voldemort scenes...thks and gudluck
Violet Wild chapter 3 . 8/26/2010
I can't believe no one has reviewed this yet! It's well written, and I like the relationship you create between Lucius and Narcissa, although I do think they fell in love a little too easily. Still a good story though, I've never seen one like this. Keep writing!