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   fogsrollingin chapter 9 . 1/27 This was such a fantastic interesting & emotional version of the pilot. Thank you so much for writing it! Xoxo |
| Hailey chapter 9 . 1/17/2019 LOVE THISSSSSSSS ASIDIHWOJHWJDHIUE SO WELL WRITTEN AND GOOD! |
| sparklybutterfly42 chapter 9 . 1/5/2019 I doubt you check reviews anymore. But I just wanted to say this story is gorgeous and their relationship is so real and it was just beautifully written. Thanks! |
| jmr27 chapter 9 . 11/18/2018 Excellent work! |
| PharmTech chapter 9 . 7/11/2018 By far my most favorite Stanford era fics I've ever read. Wow this was amazing! Never would have guessed English was your second language either. I absolutely loved it! I'm going to save it so I can read it again and again. Thank you so much for sharing! |
| imRayne chapter 9 . 4/30/2018 awwww it hurts but it is so painfully beautiful. I love the dark depressed emotion flowing through the fiction and how the brothers supported each other in a desperate you for posting it.:) |
| Em Tornado chapter 1 . 2/24/2018 All I can say is... Holy shit. That was out of the world. Woah. |
| Rababaz chapter 9 . 10/6/2017 Omg, that was just sooooo freacking good and sad, but soooo great, I can't believe it! I loved it! Sérieux, magnifique! Bisous |
| anxious.soul chapter 9 . 6/4/2017 Well...that was beautiful...and I am crying. |
| sunshine102897 chapter 9 . 1/31/2017 I just cried my way through this entire story. My goodess. |
| ThysaNoir chapter 9 . 8/29/2015 Okay author-nim, i should hand it out to you. this is amazing. really. neatly written, precise detail, and a really good feelings explanation job. well done. I love all abt this, and Ill point out things that particularly grasp my attention like when you make Dean feels so guilty at the fact that he maybe too protective at lil sammy and it perhaps hinder sam and john relationship. and when Dean ask Sam abt how it makes he feels when Sam always complaining abt their fucked up life. really love it. And with ways you develop your story i thought youre gonna throw a lil twist in the end, well to make it end different. buy it's okay too with the way it ends, i mean, I cant asked Sam to not love Jess right. lol. anw, thank you for the beautiful story. |
| threedays chapter 9 . 2/10/2013 Oh, this is so going on my favorites list. This is awesome! When Jess started baking cookies, I wondered if this was where it was going to end. Oh, ouch! This is beautifully done. |
| Yorushike chapter 9 . 12/29/2012 Hi, this is a very interesting and well written story. A few typing mistakes, but nothing too bad. I really liked the crazy dean idea. Even though I could never imagine Dean considering suicide in front of his brother, but thats just me. Greetings Yorushike |
| Static O. Sventura chapter 9 . 10/4/2012 This story was so good. It made me cry and I absolutely love it. |
| bubli24703987 chapter 9 . 7/22/2012 AWESOME |
