LOL, LOL, LOL ROTF LOL
Funny and cute, I am a sucker for these _
A bit short but cute!

just read it today,..hahah..cute one shot..i'm still laughing till now!hahhah

Very cute!

please continue the story about memories of nobody (POT)

LOL! That was so funny. Near the end I was all 'Awkward..." and right in the end I burst out laughing. Good job.

(too lazy to log in orz)

AHAHA. IT'S NOT AWFUL, ICHIGO. It's AWKWARD (and kind of embarrassing, if I may add). XDD YOU SHY BOY YOU. :))

BUT WHAAAAAT. ICHIGO'S FATHER IS SMOOCHING HIM? O_O WH-WHA-WHY? HOW?

Um, well, there are still misplaced words/phrases here in there (for example: "...He was flushed as he accepted it." Well, in the literal sense, he couldn't be flushed eh? You mean his face flushed, I assume?), but overall it was a pwittey fluff~! :D

AHAHAHA. AND RUKIA. LOL. :)) She knows how to get back at him no? HEE.

Keep it up! And...welcome, back?

~Kemi

aww sweet! I love it~!