Amazing! I love it! I ship them SO MUCH - they're my OTP! I'm litterarly Alyssa at the end

OMG THAT WAS SO FLUFFY AND CUTE AND OMGGGGG
*fangirls for hours*

But really, it was nice _ If you couldn't tell, I liked it :P

Omg i love this! Flufftacular! Naomi wasnt really ooc, she was just showing her loving side. she expresses that side mostly around alyssa in the game but it really does exist. IMO this story was perfect.

Omg that was soooo cute! You can never have too much fluff IMO. Yes, Naomi was a bit OOC, but you needed that for the scene to work so it's forgiven :). I really loved it, funny and well-written with very few grammar issues. Please keep up the good work 4.4/5 :)

ITS SO FLUFFY! X) I love it! That's so cute!

So adorable! :D Naomi and Little Guy are the best couple in Trauma Team and you handled both of them very well. I loved the story and found nothing wrong with it...except for these sentences:

"Alyssa led Little Guy through the spacious apartment. Little Guy noted that Naomi's home was a direct reflection of herself. It was decorated in soft neutral colors and spotless. But, Little Guy noted amused, that there was signs of Alyssa's place in Naomi's new life everywhere. "

You just use the words "Little Guy" too much that it becomes repetitive and choppy. It's a simple fix though, simply change all the other Little Guys after the first one to "he" and it's all better. Thankfully I didn't see anything like that later, so it was probably just a one time thing.

Great job again!

I loved it. Naomi was a little OOC, but honestly it was just a tiny smidge, and it wasn't nearly enough to bother me.

Great work!

-Kirbanlove23

OMG this was AMAZING! So funny, and fluffy and fuzzy and cute! :) I loved the food fight part. This story completely made my day. I thought Naomi was perfectly in character, but showing her more loving side rather than her cold business side. Please do more LGXN!

-LittleGuyLover

Aww that was cute and funny. All the ingredients to make a great story!

GOod job!

yeah! little man made a big man move!

hurry update/write more!

Absolutely adorable~ 3 I loved the part in which she smashes an egg on his head, I couldn't stop smiling at the mental image. X3