This is a fabulous story! Well done. Very believable too, you did each characters voice well.

Please write more

Oh my gosh, I love this!

This one was nice, too, but it seemed that you just wanted to put so much in here but it really didn't seem to run together. I mean, the pieces on their own were great, but you it seems like they're separate stories that may have a setting that revolves around the first one, but somehow they lack that flow and unison. Now, once again, I'm not saying that it wasn't good, it just seemed that you had so much that you wanted to write about that you threw it all into one story... Aside from that I enjoyed it, though.

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME! :) KEEP WRITING THESE!

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~ CANTBEBOTHEREDTOMAKEANACCOUNT

Just freakin AWESOME! ;)

The Snatcher scene have to say intense moments! :(

I soooo wouldnt have minded R/Hr together officially when he returned to them after leaving ;)

I loved this, you write both Ron & Hermione so well.

This is a brilliant story! I love the characterisation of Ron and Hermione. I think you nailed how Ron feels about her. Great stuff :D

Why this hasn't had more reviews i do not know, you write these perfectly. I have read your other work as well and loved them just as much.

By far one of the best oneshot i've read for a while (it's not like i spend all my time reading about fictional characters i just admire those who can write like this but it also helps that these are my two fave fictional charaters ;] )

Keep up the good work and please keep writting more!

I think this fic is the definition of perfection. Everything was so unbelievable. I loved seeing Ron punch the daylights out of that creep. I loved his desire wanting to kill him for Hermione, I loved his protection for Hermione. Even though Harry wasn't even a big part in this fic, you wrote him in nicely as well. The concern in both Ron and Hermione. This had everything in it, it was romantic, angsty, a bit of action. Everything...even some comedic relief. I couldn't help but smile at the cuteness and love of R/H.

"Alright, then… so now we focus on fighting the Dark Lord …but understand that all of this… I'm in it for you…for us. So we can have a proper go at it. I'll be fighting so I can snog the hell out of you as soon as it's over." Hermione felt her stomach do tiny flip-flops at his statement. She closed her eyes and relaxed deeper against him.

My heart did so many flip flops as well:) God, you really know how to pull at the heart strings. That was really sweet and funny, and very Ron.

The ending was just perfection too. I could just live on this story forever. 3

Amazing job. You really know how to write R/H. Hope you continue to do so.

bloody brilliant, my friend. I just loved it!

That filthy snatcher, bad, bad boy, making Ron furious and jealous. Good for him he confessed to Hermione how he felt because he could have lost her again.

Ohhh, what happened with that line: "I want to kiss you, Hermione." You-are-going-to-kill-me! Love the story :)

Will you write more R/Hr? Please, please, please? I love the way you write and portrait them, is amazing.

what a wonderful piece, i read it and had to go back and read it again. I loved it! Great work!

Loved it! *favourites, then dashes off to read your other stuff*

This was amazing. The emotions were so real. I felt Hermione's fear, the boys' anger, Hermione's helplessness when Harry and Ron wanted to kill somebody, and all the love at the end. The ending was truly beautiful and I loved it. Excellent job!