But there wasn't a next time:(

Fuck! What a way to leave me hanging. Talk about being a tease. Damn you for leaving me with and unfinished story but at the same time I like you for writing a story I enjoyed reading.

On a serious note, it's been years. My hope that you haven't forgotten about this story is miniscule at the moment but I'll be keeping my fingers crossed and of course follow your story, you never know.

That was a little too tidy. I still like it, but there could be more depth to the story. There should be problems surrounding their relationship. Small and big things they have to deal with. Foreshadowing. Possible thoughts and suspicions of the other Cullens. Descriptions of the setting. Scene changes. Traveling. World building. The Cullen's would need time to deal with this. But if this narrow story is the one you continue to write, it's still wonderful to focus on just alice and bella. If I continue to enjoy it, I wish you would Update, but I still have a ways to go.

Very good depiction of a truely abusive and insane edward. He is controlling in canon but I guess if he cracked... It's hard to read about but it paints the picture of violence and obsession quite well.

This is quite the story. It's a little fast in the alice/bella relationship progression, but the descriptions and writing make up for it. The dark turn of events is a very welcome change. Excited to see what happens.

What a dick!

looks good, when/if you do decide to coninue pm me and let me know

Fuck she better say yes! My god!

Awww update soon...

That's it all done? I must see if there's a sequel, cause umm aah yum I liked this fanfic .Epically the edweird bash but am hoping to read more like the weeding and Charlie's reaction. There so much more where this story could go its that good and open to so many different bunnies.

I can't believe you never finished this! I want the answer n wedding and reactions! Btw woohoo on the death to Edward...I have always hated his character...

I have to say that I love the detail you put into one simple kiss. Actually, it wasn't just a simple kiss. It was so much more than that and you actually captured every emotion and described it perfectly. I had no trouble imagining any of it as I was reading it. Sometimes I find myself having to reread a paragraph to try to understand what the author was trying to convey...not with you. Beautiful and talented. FYI...I laughed out loud when she threw herself to the floor...kudos!

Continue please !

So very hawt and sweet. I truly love the whole idea of Edward getting ripped apart and burned - he was a jerk in the books *I know, an unpopular opinion*.
Thank you for a fun story, I hope you continue writing!

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