Rereading this story for the 6th time now lol. Still good.

You know Pat isn't as snarky or foul-mouthed in the more recent stories I kinda miss that.

The latest Snapshot reminded me of exactly why I loved this first story sooooooo much!

So first off sorry I never reviewed this story before, I don't remember if I found this story before it was complete or not. I think it was after. Anyway I remember what bothered me so much about the timing. You said this was a year after season six and yet Buffy's lives in the dorms with Willow while Dawn lives...? And Joyce is dead...? (at least in cannon she died season 5 but I forget here in this story how that works) so that is a major inconsistency that you should fix at some point. It is where all my future confusion stems as well cause I believe in the next story Buffy is suddenly living back home.

Willow/Tara is a great matchup but its also the show's pairing so not that much is written.
I like Willow and Tara. Even better is VampWillow and Tara or Willow and VampTara.

Willow Spike is way over done but also can be good, it takes more effort though.
I've faved a few Willow/Spike fics.

Willow/Angel is common but harder to get right. He is so broody and Willow is not like that.
Angel is not my first choice for our fav witch.

Willow/Angelus is written alot too, and mostly it seems when the writer wants to torture a redhead. I'm not into dark fics like that, rape is not a cool thing to read about. Worse is when the writer has the victim fall in "love" with her abuser. Willow and Angelus is very hard, almost impossible to pull of well. VampWillow and Angelus is much easier to do.

Willow/Buffy or Willow/Faith are liked by many but mostly seem to be an excuse for femslash porn fics. The show has Buffy at least FIRMLY in boysland. Faith is more believable but seldom well written. I don't read much of either.

Willow/Xander while having support from the show just does not work well, he's just not smart enough for her. I tend not to read that pairing much unless the blurb stands out.

Willow/Cordelia is just wrong. How can you fall for someone who has tormented you for years?

Willow/OC is my fav pairing but its also one of the least written. So thanks so much for writing it!

Check out "Sire" by Knightmare24 on this site for a great Willow/OC fic.

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That phrase lets me find it later with Google.

Thanks again.

PS I've fav this when I'm back to my own comp.

Smoking does not make people look good, people make smoking look good.

I'm single, you'd have to be Amazing to change that, positively divine if you smoke.

wooo she like pat :333333

Awww, this story is adorable! I love it! Now, I'm off to read the sequel. :)

Ahhhh! Cliffhanger! I don't know if I can wait to see what happens.

This is turning in into and interesting story, I can't wait to see where this is headed next.

this story is very good and i love your OC she is a whole hell of a lot better than kenndy ever was

Hey,

I've been meaning to review this story for a while. I think people tend

to shy away from OC/Canon pairings, but you've actually done a pretty

good job of developing your OC. Pat seems really genuine, really

believable. I like the pace of her relationship with Willow. Even though

it's clear that she's interested, I like that she isn't making any rushed

moves. Keep up the good work. Hope to see more from you.