Reviews for Sparklers |
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Yaoi-for-the-win chapter 1 . 6/30/2013 This is definitely going on favourites! I love it! I also love how you described the magic and intensity while Harry and Draco were kissing. I also thought it was hilarious when Draco quickly refused Pansy once again. Lol! Extraordinary job! XD |
Evildevilangel chapter 1 . 9/18/2010 I totally loved this. The whole idea and the way you did it. Great job! |
GoldenVXN chapter 1 . 8/27/2010 LOL! Awesomeness! I love the game that they had to play! |
Aurora chapter 1 . 8/24/2010 This story is very very cute :) I loved it 3 The beginning was just a little hard to follow, no worries though I figured it out. :) It could also use more details, more of a story line and not so much explanation of the whole 'soul mate' thing. Also his name is Blaise. Blaise Zabini :) It's not Blaze or Blake. XD although I'm sure that last was a typo. All in all it was an adorable short story, so I'm glad you posted it :) |
Tajala chapter 1 . 8/24/2010 *lol*... loved it. very cute |
number1sasunarufan chapter 1 . 8/23/2010 loved it and the idea was awesome! |
tonks-666 chapter 1 . 8/23/2010 I love it! I love you! I love it! I love you! This fic is amazing! Considering that they were all drunk... Well, now, I'm just speechless! I have nothing else to say except that you get slash-flavored cookies! |
AngelwhiteHeart chapter 1 . 8/23/2010 SOOOO Nice (L) SOOO Cute ... Wish i have my one extraordinary day (A) |
VeryVeryDead chapter 1 . 8/23/2010 It was an interesting idea, but I don't think it was exectured to its full potential. Right from the get-go it was a bit rush and confusing. The first few lines were a bit rushed, it didn't really pick up an atmosphere, making it a bit of a 'meh' feeling from the start. A few spelling mistakes and the confusion came with multiple people talking yet not taking a new line for each new voice. So you didn't know who was talking at first. I didn't think there was much explanation, thus, to me, making a lot of it very out of character. Why is Draco so friendly and so jokey? Why do the Gryffindors suddenly like the Slytherins? I think there was a lot of details missed out that could have really made this fic something else. But you had some good ideas and it was cute. |
bob chapter 1 . 8/23/2010 Lovely story! |
YeiYai chapter 1 . 8/23/2010 Hot. |
DELETEDFORGOODDDDDD chapter 1 . 8/23/2010 Cute story. Very good, but just to let you know it's Blaise not Blaze. Just for future reference. |
NKIqbal chapter 1 . 8/23/2010 That was one HOT chapter! You really need to write more stories on here! Cheers Namra aka Nimzie XD |
OllyO111 chapter 1 . 8/23/2010 I'm too tired to log in, sorry. BUT! I HAD to review this story! It was soooo adorable. I like the way it was written and it made me laugh a lot. I like the sparkler idea and I thought the end was absolutely precious! :D Now, I don't know if you write smut, but if you do, you should definitely make a sequel to this. I LOVED IT! Keep writing! |