why did you stop?

"A cereal killer!" haha so good

Looks like the culprit just got MILKED. This story is just...pure amazing-ness. I really hope you continue it!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA I LOVE IT!:) And I want to see Captian Anderson in one of them

I just busted a gut :3

And to answer you question...id love to see a Conrad one.

I feel terrible for not seeing that punchline xD

Biotic God should make an appearance

Dear God, please continue writing this. Maybe even do a hipster crime.

short and hilarious it works

Please Update! Please Please Please!

HAHAHAHAHA

awsome man! this reminds me of hard justice episodes.

So please continue

Just so you know, I was at work when I read this, and I literally burst out laughing at the last line. There need to be more of these! Hilarious!

A very funny fic so far i like it update soon as i cant wait to read the next chapter but i hope this fic wont be too humorous and i think this fic could also develop into a serious fic as well as a comedy.

YEEEEEEAAAAAAAAHHHhHHHH!

Gotta love those Caruso one liners! Keep this up, it sounds really funny.

Review'd out!

-JeanDaBean

hahahaha, I like! keep up the good work! Be sure to have Tali be the nagging wife with the heart of gold.

oh, and this will make Shepard the crazy, street smart partner and Garrus the veteran hard ass lol