A bit confusing at some points, but a really good fanfic! I loved it!

OMG! First chapter and I already love this story! I hope you'll continue this so I won't die of boredom here in my room. Anyways you wrote perfectly well and explained a lot of stuff and I love how Reese just stares up at the ceiling and thinks about the situation and stuff. Update! Fire me! Please... Pretty please *puppy-dog eyes*

This is a good start. When will you continue?

I like :)

I can't believe I didn't find this sooner...but alas school and work must come first -_-

Anyways, I loved the dream in the beginning (although I wish it had been real). It was very sweet and cute

I love Reese's thoughts. Not sure why XD I just find them very interesting (of course Reese himself is a very interesting person).

Ok, so can't wait to read more! Update soon.

Ja ne! _

So it took me forever, but I'm finally reviewing this. And I'm doing it NOW and getting it done because it should have been done sooner, and because you deserve it. This fic has so much potential for downright awesomeness. :D

Aww, Malcolm and Reese lying in bed, just staring at each other. Even if it's a dream, that's just cute. And lol at Dewey and Hal. I know it says Tightrope Champion on his leotard, but for some reason I imagined Hal pirouetting like a ballerina. XD

And, of course, cue Dewey's Lois voice of DOOM. XD (That's what I imagine-Dewey's voice turning into his mom's.)

Pouting Reese muttering "cute" about Malcolm love. Srsly.

And the angst begins! In the form of self-doubt, no less. Yes Reese, your brothers are totally going to notice if you don't give them their daily knuckle sandwiches in the morning. XD

And lol at Malcolm calmly eating his cereal with possible doom lurking right next to him-as if he were perfectly safe, and not questioning Reese why he wanted to hit him. XD

Hmm.. Reese's double-standard with the Krelboynes is interesting. He hits a kid (poor Carl Jenkins) for agreeing with him about them. Oh Reese. Poor messed-up-in-the-head Reese. XD

XD "Reese doesn't have a girlfriend." I wonder why, Malcolm? Could it be because you're a frickin' tease? XD

"Do not pass go, do not collect two hundred dollars." XDD I love that you included that. IS HILARIOUS. XDD

And we have successfully established that Malcolm is a douche. Of course, they're all kinda douches to one another, so that's really no surprise. But still, douche move there, Malcolm, rubbing Reese's grounding in his face.

Yes, IS DOOM. Reese actually realized that he did wrong! The world is ending... Or Reese has a crush on his brother. That could do it too. XD

I have come to the conclusion that your writing is... Hmm... How should I put it? It's a lot like poetry, actually. It's not in poem-form, but your wording and sentence structure make it seem light and quick, like a poem. If that makes any sense at all. XD Is definitely not bad thing, though.

You need to get to writing the next chapter. Cos now that I has written my long-ass review, I get to annoy you into writing chapter two. -evil grin- You ish going to hate me. XP

Well I already gave you a detailed review the other day, so I'll just say: Keep writing! :D

The dream was hilarious, original, and very much like something the show itself would have. Then it just continued to get better and better.

First, love the little details that improve the story like 'TIGHTROPE CHAMPION' on Hal's chest (made the outfit!), Reese forgetting school (figures), and the movie 'Dizzy Cat'.

Second, I love the characterizations! Particularly of Lois and Malcolm, who were funny; snarky; and very much in character. Although it's not dialogue, I think the line ' Lois put her arms out with what was like a loony, lopsided grin that Reese would have laughed at under different circumstances.' is one of the best-articulated depictions of Lois ever; for all her yelling, that smile is definitely one of her scarier expressions!

Anyway, love it! Adding to my alerts and can't wait for the fluff and angst.