This is a great song! Nice job on the lyrics

Oh. My. Gosh!

This is the most brilliant songfic I've ever read in my life. Seriously. I do not know how you came up with this, but this is great! It fits perfectly with the song, (and I know this because I was singing it. Haha!) And the lyrics are absolute genius. I wish I could give you a high-five or a hug right now for writing this!

Haha! I'm definatly favoriting this.

:)

I loveed it!

I'm actually not a peeta/Katniss...at all. But i am being completely objective when I say; that was brilliant!

Love how you portrayed a lot of elements in this poem. And the repeting as if it's the chorus is also cool.

Write more poems? Like maybe of Gale and katniss, the part where Peeta proposes in the book and in her mind, she thinks of Gale and how he would react to this? (even though in the end we all know if she accepts the proposal or not) (it doesn't have to be all lovey-dovey. Not by any means. Just her wondering what Gale whould make of this, if he sees through all of this acting or if he will fall for it like everyone else. If he will be hurt. Becuase he is like her best friend and stuff.

Just a small suggestion.

I liked it! here's a virtual cookie (::) :)

Cute _