That was awesome, I think you really captured Draco and his thoughts perfectly. It was so realistic, and really great.

I liked it. Very nice and very realistic. I can't say I agree with Draco, but I do believe it is definitely how Draco would feel. I've always felt that Lucius was a greatly misunderstood character, especially by his son. But that's just the Luc-lover in me ;) Anyway, nicely done. Poor Luc upon receiving such a letter, though. I do believe he did love his family, but I can totally see how Draco would misinterpret that. Anyways, nicely done :)

~Lucinda

LOVE this. Usually letter!fics aren't my cup of tea, but I can really hear Draco in this. It actually gives the reader a very good grasp of why Draco was so bloody attached to Lucius, and what could very well have been the outcome. It's engagin- I wish there was more. :)

Way to make the reader feel sorry for Draco. Not that I didn't already, I guess. No one deserves a father like Lucius.

I really like this, although part of me wanted to see more emotion I can also see Draco's formal upbringing in this, so Kudos. I kinda wasnt to write a story were this letter goes back in time to the hands of a younger Draco xD

I really like your letter to Lucius. It was very realistic written from a son who had suffered years of abuse but still loved him as a matter of loyalty. Nicely done.

I'm glad to see that Draco put his big boy pants on!

That was really good! You should write Mr. Malfoys reaction to this! I think it would be good! I actually think Draco always kind of had these fellings somewhere inside him!

i like it... a lot. :)

This was very well written and quite true. I couldn't ever imagine Draco being this cold to his father in the face, but in a letter definitely. Great job! :D

Aw nice job! This was well written, and I love how you made this into a letter. I love the idea of Draco growing up and finally realizing right from wrong, but I felt like sometimes you got just a little OOC. But otherwise, nice job.

Wow... I love this fic so much... But it's so sad... That's not a bad thing at all, really. It's sad because it's powerful. But now I've got a knot in my throat...

-hugs the talented writer-

Thank you for posting this! Be proud, very proud. And keep writing! :D

hey there nice piece very angsty. good job.

A very realistic piece. i luvd d way you portrayed draco!

that was amazing