Hi! It's been a while since this story was updated, so I hope I'm not too late to comment,but I wanted to say I really liked it, especially since it felt, in a way, believeable, considering who the characters are in the series - and the way they act, wanting to fix their relationship, but both afraid of actually speaking of it is, I feel, a good take on how two persons that are polar opposites would end up communicating - after all, they say opposite attracts, but they never said the ride was smooth.

I also liked that you treated Hitsugaya as an adult, which is what he is in the story anyway, with being a captain - makes sense that he would also have experience with other facets of the "adult" life. And Rangiku's experience of sex and love prior to their relationship makes sense too, considering her love for Ichimaru and the general treatment of loud ladies in conservative societies - much like the Soul Society as describe, when you think of it.

And I particularly liked how you wrote Rangiku - she is in love, but she realizes at some point that it can't be the sole focus in her life, and I think that is a really nice way to build a female lead character. Romance, but with a protagonist that still has a life that would make her, indeed, interesting or strong, and worthy of the respect and admiration Hitsugaya supposedly has for her. And I liked how you made her blind at first to the way she clung to him, but then realizes she's repeating mistakes again. Makes her more real, y'know?

Great work with the secondary characters too - you can feel they have a life too, even if it isn't shown anywhere else than in the passing comments in the dialogues, and aren't just waiting around to fill their part in Rangiku's and Hitsugaya's story, and as they say, it's those details that sets a story apart from the strangely closed worlds.

And let's face it, you write really nicely - clear description of action, nice, credible dialogues and hot romance ;)

Here's to hoping you're still having fun writing, wherever you are - and to the hope that you maybe will someday come back to finish this story too?

Checking back after some time, and still no update. This makes me sad, as this is one of my favourite fanfics. If you can, pretty please, update!

omg you stopped nooooooooooo it is sooooo good and ahhh frustrating haha please update! ((((

great story please post soon.
p.s. i don't speak ingles. I'm brazilliam, but i love the story, read with google translate.

Is there Ulquiorra or Byakuya in this fic? They are my favourite. Nice one too. Please write more thanks. You are great. Thanks.

Good Job. I can't wait for the next one. I really do like reading from you.

This story is so unbelievable good that I should be working and instead I'm reading it from chapter 1 to 14. I really love how you developped Toshiro and Rangiku and made their relationship grew or paused depending on the situation. I can't wait for more.

Anki

Hi, Really sorry that it took me forever to review the chapter didn't disappoint. I find it kinda irritating that Hitsugaya and Mastsumoto can't come to some form of understanding, But I get were there coming from. It good that Rangiku wants to stand on her own and try to make her self happy, It showing her strong, independent women traits. It nice that Jushiro, Shunsui and Nanao were there for hard time. Also Shunsui insight to art love was great, I really like how she defined Toushirou. It showed she still loves him dearly. I like Toushirou brooding and sulking over losing Rangiku, Loved the talk Ichigo gave him. I really there friendship/bromance, It cool Toushirou has some one to talk to. I like how Toushirou Is with Momo. The ache the both went through from being away from each other, Was very bittersweet. I can very much see both of them working themselves In the ground. To forget about there pain. Nice to how Rangiku handle things with the new recruits. I wonder how she handle the news, When she hears Hitsugaya Is leading an attack on Yammy. I hope you show that, No need to apologies. Take you time when you update, Try update soon If you do have time PEACE AND LOVE.

Nice chapter. You did a good job of making the transition (of sorts) natural and not seem forced. I'm glad that Matsumoto is standing up for herself and moving on. The plot twist with the kids is interesting and I'm looking forward to seeing how the good guys go after Yammy.

as usual you don't disappoint in getting out a chapter that just has me wanting more even after a long time without updates

It's a nice chapter, even there's nothing to make great impact like other chapter, it's still nice, can make me read every texts and want to know what'll happen next. It's good to see they apart, to see Matsumoto decide to live her life and Toshiro's feeling without her. I feel that next chapters would be more and more dramatic before they can resolve all of their problem. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Okay, so correct me if I am wrong, but he took her tears from the last chapter as tears of hurt, not the joy she was actually experiencing. So he sent her to ukitake, then she came and had sex with him and he thought it was goodbye sex, and now he is freaking out right? So basically they are in love with each other but think the other wants nothing to do with them (and toshiro for some reason thinks he doesnt deserve her) Is this right, because it's a bit confusing. atm, good shit though.

Jeez I hope you update soon. I live this story and at the current moment I really wish these two idiots would just talk to each other and realize that Toshirou does love her, everything would be all fine and dandy. Ass for Momo, that is a serious problem. How the hell is she dead? Why the hell wasn't Toshirou informed? And hire the hell did they lose a child Tousen? Bah, I guess I'll just wait next chapter. I hope you updated really soon!

OH MY GOSSSSHHHH! I literally yelled FUCCCKKKKKKK when i realized i just finished the chapter. Your story is soooo awesome I am so in love! I really really really like it!

This story is just amazing. AMAZING. And heart-stopping not to mention. You are such a lovely writer and I cant get enough of your stories! Keep up the good work!