Still very very very very good wish you would continue this this is my second time being this and I really want the rest

great story, weak ending, completely abrupt

I've followed and loved this story from the very first chapter. And I just have to say... this is one PIT of an ending. Now my brain is frying it's self over imagining all the possible outcomes. frag... I hate that this awesome story is now done *wails dramatically in sadness*

Omg...I just read the first chapter and I started to cry...LOL

when the next chapter

OK. That's a cliffhanger. Nicely written. It kept my attention even with the delays in updates. Will there be a continuation?
If so, when?

-Seren D. Petty.

I liked the story over all but I feel that there are some things left unexplained

I loved it! It got a little tedious to read sometimes, but it was great over all.

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story and wished it wasn't over. There were sections that I found confusing and wished there was more explanation (i.e. bonds) but it didn't detract from the story itself which was the friendship between Bee and Sam. I will certainly miss this, thanks for writing!

"Ok, then, you is Optimus," said mech nodded and she turned to us. "And you're Bumblebee."
It's "are Optimus" not is. I already reviewed once as myself so I couldn't review again just noticed this is my third time reading through your story. It's really good and I thoroughly enjoy it I truly believe it's a classic on the site and has opened up a whole new genre of transformers fanfiction

This story is amazing. The mind link idea is really well written, and i look forward to any similar stories from you. Altho i was totally thrown by the ending, it was still good

can't wait for more

Can u write a oneshot of what exactly was said with starscream. And what exactly happened. Its kinda funny to see him spazz out... well, more than usual

Uh oh, I wonder what Sam's up too. And I'm also curious about that thing he's trying remember

I would love to read your other stories, but only after u finish this one. Its just that good. And somebody gave starscream one too many cocopuffs...