I think you really captured their personalities. Great descriptions, too.

Aw this was just everything and more! Genuine, cheeky, in character, hilarious, I could go on and on and on but basically I wish this was an episode in the anime, I would've been overjoyed because I absolutely enjoyed every moment of reading this fic. It was just too fantastic!

This first chapter is sooo well written and incredibly in character for them both, I literally cant even! This is soo amazing!

Ahhhh this is so perfectly in character. I love it!

Really enjoyed your fic! What a sweet story and quite well-written.

Hey night heart just imagine an exclamation mark there I am too lazy to insert punctuations well first of all the idea and the narrative were both something you won't catch these days referring to the narrative here imagine a goofy smile from a majorly angry and strong looking girl too it was catchy and formal without running out of the embrace of comprehension which was seriously well managed I won't say I love the story since that will be an exaggeration just let me tell you it was good enough to earn you many praising reviews which I am sure you did insert a sigh here I just realized typing on a tab can be totally shitty please don't mind my language

This was awesome! Write moreee!

I realy liked this one xD

I burst out crying on the "love ain't about gettin' what ya want" part. this story is so wonderful!

I think it's REALLY well written! The way of bringing it up is just SO cute! (XD Haah...3) I like the aspect of "moderation" if it could be called that way, not presenting like...wrong stuff or the alike. The way of writing is very precise too and I could almost see the image in mah head like in every good book I read ( or the ones that I have to reach for the dictionary every 5 sec cuz I don't get the words) I get the feeling it's a puzzle just assembling itself before me as if animated by some weird maniac magical strenght.

OMG. You kill me, dude. You just kill me with how perfectly it happens.

Perfect. Just perfect.

Loved this! Comes under "about damn time". Besides I'm a sucker for a love story. Was supposed to ride my steed this am but had to take the hubby to the docs instead so here I am reading. It was a fair trade, thanks!

Awwwwww! CUTEST RENxRUKI EVER! I loved it soooo much! Thank you for making my day!

Aw, he's not dead... anyway, I'm adding this fic to the Stray Dog and the Star community, happy birthday (belated) Renji. _