Sadly there's no sequel :((
Anyway, I really enjoyed reading it! Good work.
(Poor Brooklyn, the one time he gets the girl and then she "disappears" with this cliffhanger :( )

Cool! Is there a sequel to this story?

I think this would make any woman be scared of future motherhood because right now...I'm terrified

I almost had...a HEART ATTACK from this one

Wow...my heart is aching right now. First surviving a near-death experience and now a child's hopes dream crushed into nothingness by mother's unspoken betrayal. It's just...too painful

Your awesomeness needs to fix her spelling at your age. Other than that I'm hooked

I'm actually friends with BlackGargie sis

Ok I think you've left us wanting more for a good while XD

This is a great first chapter :) Half way in I wanted to know more which made me read a little faster. Interesting character development so far, I'll definitely be reading more chapters awesome work

i...find...you...

I REALLY WANT TO SEE THE END OF THIS STORY!

IF YOU WANT THIS STORY TO SURVIVE MARCH 19, PLZ COPY AND USE THIS LINK!

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AMAZING! I made it all the way through. I don't believe I know any words to describe how I feel about this story. I got to know what happens next! You HAVE to FINISH this story Xai!

Lol the commit made right before this is mine the confirmation email was taking too long, but I meant every word I said about the story keep up the good work Xai!

Lol commit made right before this is mine confirmation email took awhile but I meant every word I said keep up the good work Xai

I've read the first four chapters of "Impress Me" and I'm already a big fan. The first chapter has a great very descriptive beggining for a story I can imagine what's happening in my head, and the sorrow I feel from chapter 4 EPIC WIN. I can't wait tell I get to the romance of the story keep up the good work Xai!