I liked how you wrote their reactions to this. Especially them thinking about"what it means to have a baby." Because this would bring a lot of reflection on what they'd done, and what right they have to raise a child. The ending was lovely.

Also, I loved that Black Hayate woke up Roy and alerted him to Riza being sick. What a good dog.

Awesome story! I really liked it.

I loved it :)

I absolutely loved this! It was short and sweet and I could definitely see things playing out this way. And I like how you ended it! :)

I LOVED the ending. What Riza said is very true. So beautiful. Yay for RoyxRiza x3

I love this, its so cute

Haha. I can totally see the two of them like this. "I was trying to think of a fun way to tell you." Great job! :D

That was so cute! I would love to read a sequel to this.

I stumbled across your story and absolutely loved reading it :D It was brilliantly written and so in character :) I really loved the Amy idea and, being my own name is Amie, knew the whole beloved/friend thing and thought it worked great :) Thank you for writing this!

awww this is so sweet! i can tell that this is going to be a very good fanfic indeed