Great story! And I hope to see the sequel soon! Yes, Charlie needs to stop bitching about losing the team. When is he going to get over it? *sighs*

Woo hoo! Loved it, and you're right, there'd better be a sequel... oh wait, there already is, and I've read that too. Write more asap, I love the way you write (and for the record, I personally don't find your style "juvenile" or "needing work"). If you ever write slash there's a page reserved for you on mine and Vic's website. Keep writing, you rock!

I agree with just about everything in this story except the splitting up of the Bash Brothers. But in general, story line is good, but it's a lot of explaining and not enough storytelling. The writing is juvenile and needs work, but it's a good basis for a story, it just needs work. Also, Goldberg should be on JV & Connie on Varsity. ;-)

This was a nice end. Too bad the duckies got split though.

You better be writing a sequel! Saying that I like this story would be an understatement. Write more soon!

Ooh, splitting the Ducks up. Wonder what they'll do without Conway as Captain. Assuming, of course, that he will make Varsity...which he could, it's not like he lacks the skill. Anyway, great job, you'd better write more quickly because this is slowly slipping down the updated portion of my favorite stories list!

Wow poor JV Duckies...

lol, I really like this story. Please write more soon! One question though? Why did you split the Ducks up? You are making me cry breaking them up!

So Gavin has a roommate named Dana? I might like that character lol though I'm female.

HOpe to see more soon! This is turning into a real good fic. Uh is this Colin guy the younger brother of Varsity jerk Reily? I know that's obvious but bare with me ;).

I like it. So she is as fast as Luis? you go girl! please keep writing

Ah! Another new character! I really like Rae, too. This is great so far- definitely keep going!

i really like this so far! keep on going, its good. you write in a nice way, and have some detail instead of just getting straight to the point. i like that. good work! (i think i repeated myself a whole lot)

*bounces happily* Yay, I was very glad to see Chapter 2 up. So, when's 3 going to be hitting our monitors? This story is great, I love Rae's sarcasm. Please continue, and stop taking so torturously long to update (ok, a few days, but patience is a virtue I do not posses).

So far so good. Now all ya need to do is write more! :)