This was very amusing to read, my cheeks hurt from smiling especially from the last part with sai lol. Great work!

Omg! That was intense. Wow. I'm speechless.

love it

Oh my gosh, I freaking loved it! The way you described Sasuske and Sakura's thoughts, the way you connected everything with Sai... 5 stars

OMG ASFSHJK. Pleaseeeeeee write more, longer stories! I love this and I would reallyyyy love to read more!

omg that ws sooooo kawaiiiii omg hayst i need romance in my life. kudos to you guys! this is good!

THIS IS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN I WILL RECOMMEND THIS TO EVERYONE I KNOW GOD BLESS U

I enjoyed reading this story very much .Thank you .Take care ,good luck :)

love it!

this was beautiful.
like long car rides on dark cold nights
like sand between you toes
like Jack and Sally living happily ever after
like loveing someone who loves you
like drinking tea at a park, on a bench, at the middle of the day
i felt so warm reading this
thank you.

EEP. I LOVE THIS. LIKE A LOT. LIKE REALLY. I DO. ;;

The concept of everything is just so awesome. DESTINY, you awesome thing. Sai might be a fortune teller or something... or he might actually be Cupid in disguise. 3

This might actually be one of the best interpretation of love at first sight. SasuSaku is just too beautiful for this. ;;

You guys are such great writers that you managed to make me puke rainbows. Thank you. ;;

Nice concept!

kyaaaaa :3 so sweet! what about a sequel or something? :)

Oh my o_o I love Sasusaku. I love painting. Can you guess why I absolutely love it? OMG x_x

I'm not stalking you...much.
It's true however (even scientifically) that art in any form can evoke emotions in there purest forms.
And sometimes lead to hot sex.
Really, it's awesome.