This is great! Please update this, it's been two years and I want to see these characters develop more.:)

Please keep posting I love this story. I thought the part about no dresses was brilliant.

Wait.I'm confused. Is the dude talking to Sue Elrond?

Wow the Sue is getting confused... Could she be tainted by the ring? Allison is going to be her anchor or light when things goes south huh.

I'm going to come off as really weird when I say this. I'll even be digging my own grave. I think I'm the only one so far to say it. But...

(Come on, Rua, just say it! Courage, mon enfant!)

Okay, here goes: (takes deep breath) I think I like the Sue more than Allison!

There! I said it! Please don't hit me!

It's just, she's silly and self-obsessed and pampered and what not, yes, but Allison is whining too much. She's goth, bitter, a tad vindictive, and generally not a nice person to be around. And so, I find myself feeling more sympathy for the Sue than for Allison.

As for you, supremely talented author, you've just made a fan! I'm always on the lookout for off-the-beaten-track stories such as this, and you've done a wonderful job of portraying 2 very different characters.

I've only read the first chapter so far (stole a few minutes during work! :p), but I'm planning on reading the rest tonight itself!

Good job, and keep writing!

Oh the humor in this chapter tickled my funny bone.
Hi! I really like this fanfic but i'm always to scared to review because of my crappy english. I can understand English perfectly but when it comes to speaking it myself.. I blank out.. sorry. Anyway I just wanted to tell you what I taught about this chapter with my poor english :).
I really really like Allison's personallity. I love her witty little comments and her hate towards *bleep* and the way she expressed it. Gandalf is in character as far as i'm concerned I've noted that the moment he lit his pipe haha. I appreciate the way you write the story. We can see the point of view of both girls wich tames my curiosity to a proper limit. In most fics we only see the pov of the sue. So i'm glad you made a diffrence . I just hope Allison stays normal. I mean.. non powerfull..and stuff. Next chapter will contain the counsil right? Can't wait .. I have a feeling the sue will be raping legolas .. Anyway i just want to thank you for your time to write these chapters. And I want you to have fun while writing the next :)

I seriously love this story.

Hello, Sanriko! It's Sharpie and I've changed my name! Anyways, it's a pleasure to see that you've updated. You writing is brilliant, as always. It fuels my undying hate for your Mary Sue and my sympathy towards Allison. I have a theory that *BLEEP* is a succubi, a mythical soul-sucking creature that takes in the form of beautiful alluring women. Please do update soon! Thanks!

SO this girl has powers too? What the heck? Poor Allison. If only...

Aw, at least you manage to de-sue the mary-sue temperarly.

Uh OH! Update soon! I love this! Are they sisters?

Ofcourse the mary sue has the power to magicly heal frodo now everyone will love and obey her and live happily ever after. HELL NAWW MURDER HER ALLISON !BRING HER THE SWEET MERCY OF DEATH HAHAHAHA HAAAHAHAHAH

I just want to say, this story had me laughing so hard my aunt had to come check on me. I love Allison and really don't blame her for wanting to strangle Miss Perfect. I most likely would not have possessed her restraint. XD

HEY REVIEWER BELOW WITH NO NAME ! YEAH YOU! DON'T YOU SMACK MY FAV AUTHOR I WILL EAT YOU AND PEE IN YOUR FOOD. Don't mind the rude reviewer sanriko i love your story's 3

Oh man the sue and allison keep swiching rolls like how the sue keeps nagging/scolding like a parent while allison seem to guide her also miss mary-sue seem to follow allison like a lost puppy.