I just finished reading this. I really enjoyed it. I wish you’d write an epi or two, showing them overcoming her infertility. I’d like to believe her blood transfusion to him helps him get her pregnant some way, since it changed him some way. Just wishful thinking. You did a great job handling the story with all the sex scenes in there. Usually I’m like, this is repetitive, but it didn’t feel that way to me. I’m putting this on “alert” just in case. ‘Wink’ Thanks for sharing this with us. I’m going to tell my group about it - The Twilight Fan Fiction Finders.

Loved this so much. 3rd time I've read it.
Would love for the baby to happen though

Yeah with loose ends but it was a very entertaining story! I really like it

Weird and crazy but I dig it hahaha I like the distopian stuff and meaning behind

Oh my... Everything is just too much. Love it

Thank you for this story. I loved it! I know you said you were outside of your comfort zone, but I thought you did a great job. Hope all is well with you! Take care!

Holy crap what can I say that I haven't said. Great story, f'n great plot- original, and brilliant writing. Thanks for sharing.

This sounds bad.

Really one of the best Aus I've read in a long time.

You've woven such a mystery that I don't want to stop reading and do the things I really need to get done. Excellent

THIS is really good.

So different, really intrigued.

For some trained badass merc, Edward is slow as fuck.

It's "per se," not "per say."

"You'll have free reign..." No. It's "free rein." (Think about using reins to control a horse.)