Reviews for Lacking
rudepanda chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
Love it. For so few words you've captured the moment perfectly. I love the last line, I wasn't expecting it. : D
izzabella11 chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
lovely drabble :) There's just something about John being all caring that makes me a bit mushy...
luuluulove chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
Pretending to smoke?

Wonderful.