Reviews for Mercedes Bends
Random Peep chapter 1 . 6/22/2016
This made me smile! Pretty well written imo?
inuyasha1sasuke chapter 1 . 4/26/2016
Ha! Totally wasn't expecting THAT ending! But you definitely got the characters on point, especially Ash!
SymphonySoldierXIII chapter 1 . 8/7/2015
Aww, this is so cute! I love your writing style~
kanyon01 chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
AWHHH! That's just so cute, I really really liked this one-shot! You are a seriously great writer, and your one-shots are amazing! I haven't read any of your chaptered fics yet, but I plan on it :D
AsianCutie93 chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Lol, Dawn I think really is Ash's twin sister. They're both cute and dense. XDDD

I love your fanfic! Hope you continue to write more Palletshipping fics.
Cat-Tuong chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
"Not that dense," yeah right XP It was cute _ loved it and how practically everyone was going "wtf 0_o" when Gary was talking to them XD Great job. Keep it up )
xXxCorsetxXx chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
Ah, so so cute~
lolitawork libretto chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
very cute :)

i loved all the anime references you used. it really does make their love interest relationship seem canon!
pokemaster101 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Oh Ash. X)

I remember you. Weren't you the guy who created that palletshipping website? Or am I mistaken?

anyway, 10 years, huh? How does the change feel for both of writing a palletshippy fic and how the Pokemon anime has changed throughout the years?

Keep it up! 8DDDDD
AlchemyOtaku0922 chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
Very cute story! Loved the end :)
Animeyaoimaster chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
Sweet~!:D
Arciam chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
It was really sweet :)

But, it kinda seemed like you wanted to squeeze every Palletshipping moment in that has ever occurred, and while that may be perfect for people who don't know Palletshipping, it does make the fanfiction kinda plotless.

That's only my opinion, though, your other reviewers seem to like it :)
Rondamar chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
I really like this story. The characters, especially Ash, are pretty much in-character. I love the ending as well :)
Mantinas chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
Thanks for the shout out, my friend. And thank you for allowing me to beta this. _

This is a really good story and shall shine as a beacon of how much you love this pairing. You did a great job.
ladyblackwell chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
Yay, you're back!

I've never sought out Pokemon fanfiction before, but I watched the show while I was younger, and I still spend entirely too much time on the GBA games.

I loved Ash's cluelessness and Gary's snarkiness. Especially 'Ash's mentally stunted twin sister'.

I creeped on your Palletshipping site a few months ago, and I notice that you incorporated a lot of the evidence you posted there into this fic. Nice.

PS: Bonus points for conjugation of the verb 'to sweatdrop'
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