Awe that is so sweet! Too bad, it didn't go further, like Atemu and Yugi getting married, having kids and the lemons. Oh how I love the lemons! But I liked this story, I just hope there is a sequel xD good job.

Nice story. I enjoyed reading it.

Wow, I really liked this story and can't wait to start reading the sequel :D

I only read the first chapter, but I was hooked. I'm looking forward to read the rest, and hopefully, any other stories of yours. Keep on writing!

this is good...what happened to her job at the hospital?

Cutest story I've read about YugiOh, also the first Fem Yugi. xD

Great story!

awww that was a cute story!

ok this sucks i'm reading this chapter and listening to "Travelin' Soldier" by the Dixie EVER do u will just tear up sobsob

Hello again! So you told me before that you would like me to point out any grammatical errors or something around those lines. There was really just one thing that really caught my eye. In this chapter when Yugi and Atemu are saying that they knew who leaked the story, Yugi says, "I know you told the press" and he answers "I know you told them too". I am sure you meant "who" and that is how I corrected it while I read it. I hope that helps! Other then that another perfect chapter!

P.S. So you said you were a Math teacher and I just had to say that I am actually in college now, a freshman, trying to earn a degree in Math! I want to be a high school math teacher so I just had to say good job for sticking and getting the degree. It sounds so hard and I am not even close to finishing it!

Oh my I usually do not review completed stories to the very end but your story is breaking that! This story is amazing! It is so sweet and innocent that I just cannot help but smile. I am also like, "when are they going to get together" but I am loving the guessing. It is so nice to see them taking things slow and actually enjoying a friendship even though of course, it is plainly obvious how much they love each other.

I am slightly mad at Atemu for not noticing it in the beginning but I love the situation they are in. It will be interesting to see when he finally tells Vivian that he cannot marry her. I have this vision of Atemu at the alter about to get married and him realizing it and ruining everything right there or even Yugi saying she cannot see them getting married. Just makes me laugh but I cannot wait to see what you did!

I have not found anything wrong with it so far which I am loving. Grammar errors and all that bug the crap out of me but I have not noticed any that much. Of course the extra word here and there but that is normal! Thank you for writing such a great and intriguing story and I will let you know how I liked it at the very end! :D

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! This is so sweet! I think this story will always hold a really special place in my list of "The Best Romance Stories on Fanfiction"...and I'm completely serious.

Hey I love thus story I can't wait to read more. I think it's alittle weird to change a characters gender with out elicit failing at it because they try to keep them so similar to the original form the writer forgets about the change, but you balanced it out perfectly by keeping just enough of the original character it turned out perfect. Keep up writing cause you really are good at it.

YAY! ATEMU DITCHED THE BITCH! (does happy dance and jumps in a cirle)

not to be anxious or anything but whens atemu gonna ditch the bitch and get with yugi? I WANT MY PUZZLESHIPPING DAMNIT!