| Reviews for A Brave New World |
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dreamthief19 chapter 9 . 5/15 omg. are you alice? I swear you're psychic, because this is so how the world actually handled this. |
dreamthief19 chapter 6 . 5/15 wow ok reading about this unknown virus and situation you wrote about in 2010 is WILD considering in 2020 it's actually happening and we're in a pandemic |
Guest chapter 46 . 4/30 :) |
Guest chapter 46 . 4/19 :) |
Suzy-Chapstick chapter 46 . 2/19 Fabulous story! Phenomenal writing! Thank you! |
Cyzzz chapter 1 . 11/15/2019 I love everything ing about it! It is not rushed, main characters are well developed and the ending is so sweet. I came here after "The remnants"(which is awesome too btw) and i enjoyed every part of the story. Thank you for putting so much effort into your stories. I greatly appreciate it! |
MiserysMama chapter 46 . 11/8/2019 Fantastic story! Loved it! |
Elise de Sallier chapter 46 . 3/26/2019 Wonderful, amazing story! Thank you so much. Elise xx |
Kageyjay chapter 46 . 12/14/2018 Wow! you are such a good writer! That was really intense! The end of most chapters was a cliff-hanger. It was very hard to stop when I had to. There were some things that were a little hard to accept that it could be true. ;D I like the "full moon parties". Interesting ending. You should write for TV shows; you write cliff-hangers really well. |
Debbie Hicks chapter 46 . 11/6/2018 47. Life Goes Diffierntly Charile Swan LOK OUT ALIEN RATTLESNAKKES Infection tHEN DRAINED THEN bITTEN THE cULLENS Too hardest then then Was With as all of them the Volturi found us/them them EXECUTED!With them the infection of a alien virus spread good die then MURDERED! With the others spreadingh to their blood began to undergo a alien change Nukedtorn from myself underwent my first full moon BBBitten Laura was my mate then her screams good KILLED Then the head found us/ dying then suddenly the alien with the thre Blew apart then with the others with new four with the very as all screamijg SLICED! Tore with as all of good from the both then too late Both our blood merged then with their as a result mated byu blood then Alien venom dilluted then ourselves felt Three times earned you guessed it Pointed ears suddenly gone in Pon'farr was a Ancient Vulcan time of mating So, it is Come Pon'farr it was her Speaking in the Ancient Tongues of the Vulcans were a ancient Extraterrestrial civilzatioin then blew apart with the virus Destroy them were infected then killed us/them Popped ripped from bring them with them then too late Was Sickest dsying then Trapped from here snapped from here Extinct from here bought here the virus spread to their own bodies All of them good they phased but died of the Alien Virus but made Dead but are ATOMIZED/VAPORIZED They never had more children Had Eight hybrids they followed in death but Charile is in heat for a wife earned Pointed ears upswept eyebrows with them looks like a Very sick Vulcan male in heat died of it with them blew frely were as all around the world are infected but extinction that what they did to as all of them then suffered then more flew freely they brought here as all of them suddenly too late was mediating for my marriage in Vulcan marriage robes of Richer purple then a noise sound like a Starship's quarters Laura it is the dawn of our days for as all of our tomorrows to you husband take me revive me who Am I From the Time of Awakening my wife stood in Vulcan robes of marriage of Purple hair long in a Veil her now pointed ears upswept eyebrows myself was Outside ringing a holiest Vulcan marriage Gong her mother said to her daughter it's time then I Rang more powerfully then the wedding parry came I Prepared to ring Kail'fi'fliee! in sharper Ancient Vulcan tongues Challenged sounded like T'Pring of Vulcan I Was Sch'n T'Gai Spock Sir! She declares Challenge Bella stood held the Garnet Time Rod KROYKAH! Dressed in White Martian Religious temple robes for women wearing Vulcan religious Temple jewelry Hair was in a Colif with bangs curled but swirled sides exposed pointed ears what ye are to See comes down from the time of the Beginning without change this is the Vulcan heart this is the Vulcan soul this is Our Way Kail'farr! Charles do you burn for thy wife and future mother of your Children T'Lar, I Burn My eyes is Flame! My Heart is FLAME! Then Laura do you burn for husband I Burn My eyes is FLAME My Heart is FLAME! then herself had a power to mind meld then eyes closed a telepathic mind psi-storm Thundering loudly then welcome to our ma'at Laura Swan wife of Charlie Swan then so they were mated as all of them as all of with the very expanded as all of then too late Sliced freely then nulled from here unable to die then both then forbidden that mated with her/others mated had only eight kids followed expanded our newest race gained immortality then Torn freely were infected good Slashed freely then bought here then too late the five infected then nuked freely bitten drained blood Cracked but was full Vampire during a full moon Alice Charlie is full time Vampire oh my god bitten her yes Can we be Cullens here my husband wear this this indeed my wife here then so us then now as Charlie Cullen with Laura Cullen with the new Cullens were more much biggest then blew apart torn for now it was real then was as all of them sided then had a power so hers with theirs nuked freely us/them looked from The planet Vulcan blew apart bring as all of them guilty of marriage then blown torn freely Lost need to mate infection too far gone blasted from our/United corpses infection then Fled without warning then with as all of of clothes but both with things/as all both blew up good ours then too late blown apart were as around the world's as all remains but both three followed good departed then too late was too late it spread to as all butt Injection death then killed bring them here too late us/them aboard then too late nuked freely too late were as all of them now too late trapped in here cloaked Deactivated Exploded were more then were as all of them injected as all of them blew Vampires freely then were infected Alice what you see Volturi did this to us/all of them blew gasp Vampires we been injected with a alien virus made us Aliens officially then too late were merged in one as all both vanished fusion then blew apart from here then were with few remains then nuked then exploded but no longer then was a Ark carrying us/all of wityh packs then Had kids reincarnates then Blew apart from around the world last stage blew then Warped from Earth to Vulcan faster than light speed then reached it then now too late were more followed then crunched were as all of them suddenly blew from here lost from here bought here more as all of them as all of we report they allare ead good they been drained of blood infected of a alien virus then lost need to bear more kids then too late as all used five then drained them of blood then too late Sliced freely bought here we report they as all of them infect aliens as all of them Had as all of descendants more than as all of the very most monstrous as all of they never had more children exploded bring as all of them then too late the damages to us/they then as all of most real but true Vampires bitten/drained/cracked free heal very weirdest/extraterrestrial but not human He ran tests young man with her with as all you are Kindred/Galactic Lycans you never age or die your family killed with theirs as all of them by the Volturi but we never die out are in what the undying lands we are Elves of Arda we are Immortal Let Men roam her voice sounded grieved Momma mia three at war blown freely but young freed but the Volturi joined us/all too late their descendants ruled Earth too late the damages done to us/as all of them with as all of them by now they had stopped aging were Immortal beings forever living like them of Arda thennow as all of them were immortal people. |
Uzumaki Uchiha's chapter 1 . 6/5/2018 I don't feel bad for bella . ... I know I'm evil but I like that she's in pain she deserves it...this part of the entire twilight series her doing this to edward and jacob made me hate her. Amazing first chapter |
JustARead chapter 3 . 1/9/2018 Uhhhhh |
JustARead chapter 2 . 1/9/2018 :/ |
JustARead chapter 1 . 1/9/2018 No way hes dead...? |
froggyqueen chapter 46 . 9/10/2017 This was probably one of the most original fanfics I've read and I've been reading since 2008. I found this story after I read your first one. I loved it too. Thanks for writing! |