Oh, wow. That was beautiful!

You have left me utterly speechless. This is beyond beautiful. :)

I love it. I don't how you make the sexual act so subtle but I love it. My favourite part definitelly Arthur's projections of Ariadne and himself.

I picturing Arthur so confused about these Ariadne dreams, this new feeling in his heart/mind and he can't handle it. He needs to see her again, he desires her and the only thing he have is his dream world. It's not real and it'll be enough for him.

I hope you write more often, you have and style that is unique so don't ignore it. :0)

and with that last line, you captured my heart. absolutely beautiful: beautiful imagery, beautiful characterizations, beautiful story.

Thanks. Now I have to go to the dentist and get the cavities this fic gave me filled. This was beautiful and completely unf

Very, very nice. One of the best I've read.

This was lovely. So well written and just detailed enough to let us see but enough to let us imagine as well. Really really nice.

I loved the emotion, the carefulness in bringing the two together. Entirely believable!

That was so cute! I loved it. Especially the ending! It was so simple, yet so beautiful. I love this piece.

My heart gave a little sigh when I finished reading. Short, yet in character. Lovely, but not sappy. Thank you for such a lovely fiction.

I love this! This pairing was only hinted at in the movie but it's easily on of the cutesy couples I've ever seen.

And I adore this story. Amazing. It is lovely and sexy in a simple and classy way.

I love this!

awwwww :D so cuuuute. love Arthur. i really do.

wonderfully written- i loved the format and the way you wrote from Arthur's perspective. all sublime. :)

This was so cute... it just made me want to smile. I love your writing style, too. Great job. :)

I think this is a great fanfic! And you did an awesome job with it. Keep up the awesome work!

...I don't get it.

O_o Who's dreaming about who? Is Arthur spying on Ariadne's dreams or something at the end? Haha.