Wow esto es muy emocionante, me encanta! C:
Sé que ya tiene mucho tiempo pero quién sabe? Tal vez un día despierte y piense hoy es el día que volveré a publicar...;P Excelente trabajo!

I think you did a really good job with Arthur and what was going through his mind. I like how he was freaking out because he didn't deal with this stuff. And now he took off.

I loved how he was still dressed up even in just sitting around the apartment. I really liked how Ariadne noticed all these things about his place that fit him so perfectly. I also loved the ending.

I really liked Ariadne's thoughts regarding Arthur carrying her stuff. And I like how she can tell that he can tell she's not doing so good and needs a bit of a break.

I wondered where they were going to go, I like that he has a place there.

I loved Arthur's thoughts. I liked how it went through that first chapter and how he ended up getting onto the plane with Ariadne. It was interesting hearing a bit more about some of the things with his job and that story he told her about Africa.

Great chapter.

I completely loved this. I think you captured both Ariadne and Arthur beautifully. The descriptions you gave for Arthur was prefect.

I loved how Ariadne was dealing with what happened and her checking her totem just to make sure when she saw Arthur coming. After going through what she did for the first time that had to be a bit nerve wracking.

I can't wait to read more.

This is honestly brilliant. I especially love how you show us both of their POV's. Patiently waiting for an update. :)

This is so good! I'm horrified that you haven't updated in over a year! One of the better stories out there!

I really think this is one of the best Inception fics out there :)

Please update! I would love to be able to read more of your gorgeous story. Everything about it is so damn perfect and I would like MORE, thank you very much. And I stayed up past midnight to read it, so that's got to count for something, no?

I love your setups and such. Arthur is very fun to read in this story. Can't wait for the next chapter!

good plot, great characterization, excellent writing - I love the way you alternate between points of view, bringing out the differences in perception of the same events. You show that you put a bit of effort into descriptions of locations and traveling (which, frankly, almost no one does, so thank you) and your writing shows a maturity of expression that I think one rarely finds in fanfiction. Thanks for writing, and I hope you keep at it! I'm interested to see where this goes next )

Sad that this hasn't been updated in a whole. Hopefully you can finish this.

I notice that this story hasn't been updated recently AND I WANT MOAAAAR. It's so beautiful and brilliant and awesome and I just need to know what happens next!

I think you got Arthur and Ariadne's voices down pretty well. I hope you update soon. Great job at showing Arthur's cleverness in getting rid of the tail!