No no no, not Sirius severus and Scorpius, those names are horrible. And Harry seriously should think about Cedric first before using James, Sirius or Remus John... cause he spent a lot of time around ONE of those, but not the others (okay "lot of time" fits Snape too, but ... come on. Lusting for Mom is not a remedying character trait excusing all the hours of abuse and snark Severus spent towards Harry).

I also hate how you just end it here, it does not feel like it's over, like it was told to the end. It just stops. Also i would like to see all the bumblers get over it and make remedies, trying to become better people... and Ginny be humiliated some more :D. So much potential, so much sarcasm unsaid...

Amazing story. A hidden gem that I kept on passing by before while scrolling. I'm so glad to finally read it and enjoying this story. Although the author will never get to read this review, but I still wish the best for him in afterlife. Thank you for writing this story.

The first chapter had me interested. In the second chapter Harry is bloody annoying, and by the end of the fourth chapter the Harry in this story is an insufferable asshole. Like many other Fanfictions Authors, you went way overboard with his rude and obnoxious behaviour.

Great story!

Teddy is a hoot

Another well written, humorous story that was both entertaining and enjoyable. Thank you for sharing it.

Loved it hope you write a sequel one day

well then. i went into this expecting maybe a laugh or two and to stop a few chapters in but wow i enjoyed it alot more than i expected. good job i always like a daphne/harry story but this one was more than that it was less a romance and more a tale of how fragile friendships can be and to live your life to the best of your ability. good job.

This was really great. I have a hard time swallowing Hermione abandoning Harry so it leaves a bad taste in my mouth, but it’s incredibly well written and otherwise quite believable, and I understand she needed to take a fall for this story to work ...

But I can’t quite shake the feeling you really don’t like Hermione, and you don’t ‘get her’ as a wonderful, compassionate and loyal to the ridiculous extreme person. This was pure character assassination lol.

Still, I am happy I read it because I really enjoyed a decent Malfoy. Or a Malfoy trying to become decent. Thanks for writing

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story has a strange pace

This lockdown has been great for giving me time to re-read all these awesome stories.

I particularly love this one. The banter his hilarious, and the overall storyline is excellent. Astoria is pretty fucking sneaky haha

Damn, this gives me shivers knowing you died.

I've been reading this fic, not sure if I was enjoying it, but too intrigued to put it down. This chapter, with Harry and Draco visiting the Greengrass family, then visiting George, was still intriguing. Then George and Angelina called in Bill. I wasn't expecting that, but it's the perfect move. I am officially enjoying this fic and can't wait to see how Bill and George combine to explain Harry to Hermione and Ron.

I was afraid you were going to start bashing Hermione and Ron. And while I'm not anti-bashing, I was worried that the intriguing and thoughtful fic would be ruined by heavy handed bashing. Instead, you're on the path to showing several people how everyone, including Harry, goofed. And, having the Malfoys, who've learned some tough lessons themselves, helping everyone figure out how to improve their relationships works for me. Making the Malfoys all sweetness and light without good reason is irritating, but you've managed to avoid that by keeping some flaws.

Thank you for writing.

good